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How to love an angel

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#38
17-03-2010, 08:59 PM
Un singur cuvant am pentru tine si acesta este urmatorul: SUPER.
Ai mai progresat in ceea ce priveste descrierea, chiar mi-a placut descrierea sentimentelor fetei, numai ca sunt nemultumita de acea secventa cand povestesti ce face Lucifer. Mi-ar fi placut sa intri mai mult in detalii atat despre placerea sadica a lui Lucifer cat si durerea si disperarea lui Mougly. Oricum este destul de bine.
Imi place la nebunie scrisoarea pe care Lucifer i-a lasat-o lui Jasmine, este atat de expresiva. nu cred ca ai fi putut crea acea situatie mai bine decat ai facut-o acum.
Astept next-ul, bafta si multa inspiratie!
Aripi insangerate Astrul Trandafirului Albastru Drumuri ce nu se vor intersecta niciodata. Un sarut la miezul noptii
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 28-12-2009, 11:34 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Emm` :x - 29-12-2009, 02:36 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 29-12-2009, 03:02 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 29-12-2009, 09:31 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 30-12-2009, 05:28 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de ^ToxicK kiD^ - 30-12-2009, 05:59 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 31-12-2009, 03:24 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de MisS.sAdiStic - 31-12-2009, 04:51 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 02-01-2010, 05:03 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 02-01-2010, 05:36 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de MisS.sAdiStic - 02-01-2010, 06:54 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 21-01-2010, 09:39 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 24-01-2010, 12:54 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de Just Sugar - 24-01-2010, 02:45 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Irukandji - 25-01-2010, 10:19 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 26-01-2010, 10:22 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Irukandji - 27-01-2010, 09:58 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 27-01-2010, 11:42 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de Just Sugar - 27-01-2010, 02:03 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Abbeh. - 27-01-2010, 04:51 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 27-01-2010, 08:04 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Obsession. - 29-01-2010, 11:09 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 06-02-2010, 09:15 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Irukandji - 06-02-2010, 10:34 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 06-02-2010, 10:57 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 13-02-2010, 01:52 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 13-02-2010, 02:31 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 13-02-2010, 08:43 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 18-02-2010, 09:08 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 20-02-2010, 12:13 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de Me†al. - 20-02-2010, 10:16 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Sushiiushii - 21-02-2010, 09:29 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 07-03-2010, 02:11 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 07-03-2010, 05:23 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Sushiiushii - 07-03-2010, 08:53 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Verrine - 09-03-2010, 11:44 AM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 14-03-2010, 03:33 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 17-03-2010, 08:59 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 23-03-2010, 10:40 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de BloodyInnocence - 14-04-2010, 04:06 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 17-04-2010, 01:54 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Jasmine - 25-04-2010, 07:48 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Savarina Ali - 10-06-2010, 04:01 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de A'Svear - 22-06-2010, 08:04 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Savarina Ali - 24-06-2010, 07:10 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Abbeh. - 24-06-2010, 08:22 PM
RE: How to love an angel - de Nixu - 15-02-2011, 08:16 PM

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