The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples)

The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples)

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29-12-2008, 12:23 PM

Hallo!

Well...in primul rand vroiam sa-ti atragt atentia cu privire la titlu (vroiam mai de mult dar am uitat). Dupa titlu nu se pune punct (chiar daca ai paranteza aia dupa).
Asa acum sa revin la captiol.
Greselile ti le-au spus deja cei dinaintea mea: virgulele, greselile gramaticale etc.
Dar se vor rezolva daca citesti mai atent textul inainte sa-l postezi.
A fost un capitol superb!!!:zuppy08: Devine din ce in ce mai interesant si ma ti in suspans rau de tot.
In general totul e destul de bine, dar ar trebui sa mai lucrezi putin la descriere. :D
Cam atata....Spor la scris. Abia astept continuarea.
Chuu

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The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 21-12-2008, 11:54 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de nolazy - 22-12-2008, 12:49 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 22-12-2008, 01:56 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ArYaNnA - 22-12-2008, 02:20 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ThorthKa - 22-12-2008, 10:32 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 22-12-2008, 04:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Melyeter - 22-12-2008, 05:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 22-12-2008, 05:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 22-12-2008, 07:21 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de MisS.sAdiStic - 22-12-2008, 08:53 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de bastard_in_love - 23-12-2008, 09:47 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 23-12-2008, 10:59 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 24-12-2008, 02:57 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 24-12-2008, 11:05 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 25-12-2008, 02:01 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 25-12-2008, 03:22 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de bastard_in_love - 25-12-2008, 05:25 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 25-12-2008, 09:50 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ArYaNnA - 26-12-2008, 11:48 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 26-12-2008, 07:02 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Sol - 26-12-2008, 08:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 26-12-2008, 11:36 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 28-12-2008, 04:44 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 28-12-2008, 05:42 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 28-12-2008, 07:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 28-12-2008, 09:06 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 28-12-2008, 09:13 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 28-12-2008, 10:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 28-12-2008, 10:52 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 29-12-2008, 11:41 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 29-12-2008, 12:13 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 29-12-2008, 12:23 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 29-12-2008, 07:10 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 30-12-2008, 02:31 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 29-12-2008, 07:37 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 29-12-2008, 07:55 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 29-12-2008, 10:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 30-12-2008, 04:34 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 30-12-2008, 04:46 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 30-12-2008, 05:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 30-12-2008, 09:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 30-12-2008, 11:16 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de bastard_in_love - 01-01-2009, 04:42 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 05-01-2009, 09:40 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 06-01-2009, 12:43 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 06-01-2009, 01:21 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 06-01-2009, 04:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 06-01-2009, 05:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 07-01-2009, 12:14 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 08-01-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Selena. - 09-01-2009, 03:48 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 11-01-2009, 09:14 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 11-01-2009, 09:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 12-01-2009, 01:05 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 12-01-2009, 01:14 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 12-01-2009, 06:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 12-01-2009, 11:10 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 17-01-2009, 10:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 17-01-2009, 11:27 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 17-01-2009, 11:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 18-01-2009, 01:18 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 18-01-2009, 01:52 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 19-01-2009, 04:50 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 26-01-2009, 05:20 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 28-01-2009, 04:47 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 28-01-2009, 07:05 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 28-01-2009, 08:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 28-01-2009, 11:25 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 31-01-2009, 04:42 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de ThorthKa - 02-02-2009, 08:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Ryuu - 07-02-2009, 02:25 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 08-03-2009, 12:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 08-03-2009, 01:32 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 08-03-2009, 11:46 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 09-03-2009, 08:43 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 15-03-2009, 06:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 15-03-2009, 07:17 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 16-03-2009, 12:16 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de chrissta - 29-03-2009, 12:13 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 18-04-2009, 12:38 AM

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RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 17-05-2009, 05:15 PM

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RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de ThorthKa - 21-05-2009, 06:37 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 22-05-2009, 06:23 PM

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