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SWEET and SPICY

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Mda...uite ca am facut un efort supraomenesc si am sa iti dau comentariul ala care il astepti de cateva capitole:D..

1.Ideea ficul e suuuuper originala
2.Ma enerveaza ca te invarti in jurul cozii cu ficul,adica mai am de asteptat creca vreo cel putin 20 de capitole pana se combina astia 2....
3.Mai incapatanata de atat nu poti sa o faci pe Yui...
4.La partea de gramatica nu am ce sa reprosez,chiar foarte bine descris,iar ficul nu este umplut pana la refuz de dialog,iar greseli de tastare pot sa spun ca nu am vazut niciuna.
5.I love this fic:X:X:X

Chuuuuz....si next-ul repede...:D



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 14-04-2009, 02:29 PM
RE: Sweet and Spicy - de Ryuu - 14-04-2009, 03:05 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 17-04-2009, 01:50 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Ryuu - 17-04-2009, 02:39 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-04-2009, 01:52 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 19-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 20-04-2009, 02:49 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 21-04-2009, 06:29 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 22-04-2009, 08:11 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 23-04-2009, 09:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 24-04-2009, 12:28 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 24-04-2009, 06:59 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 24-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 25-04-2009, 06:30 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 26-04-2009, 06:29 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 27-04-2009, 07:13 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Corina. - 28-04-2009, 03:06 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 28-04-2009, 09:19 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 29-04-2009, 10:13 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Corina. - 30-04-2009, 03:20 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 30-04-2009, 08:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Corina. - 30-04-2009, 10:33 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 01-05-2009, 04:03 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 02-05-2009, 03:24 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Kido - 04-05-2009, 04:49 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 04-05-2009, 08:26 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 05-05-2009, 08:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 05-05-2009, 08:58 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 06-05-2009, 09:09 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 07-05-2009, 09:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 08-05-2009, 08:06 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 09-05-2009, 09:20 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 10-05-2009, 10:27 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 10-05-2009, 08:40 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 10-05-2009, 08:55 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Yuki4ever - 10-05-2009, 09:22 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 11-05-2009, 09:53 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 13-05-2009, 06:32 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 13-05-2009, 09:35 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 15-05-2009, 12:51 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-05-2009, 07:20 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de fake_fate - 18-05-2009, 10:19 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 22-05-2009, 09:08 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 24-05-2009, 05:38 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 24-05-2009, 05:50 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de fake_fate - 24-05-2009, 06:24 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 26-05-2009, 09:47 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 28-05-2009, 05:08 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 30-05-2009, 09:59 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de wasp - 03-06-2009, 10:22 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Annya_Anna - 08-06-2009, 02:03 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 10-06-2009, 04:14 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 11-06-2009, 03:56 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de fake_fate - 11-06-2009, 10:46 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 13-06-2009, 02:31 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 14-06-2009, 10:25 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 15-06-2009, 03:55 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 15-06-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de iuliana - 17-06-2009, 07:11 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 17-06-2009, 08:45 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-06-2009, 12:56 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 18-06-2009, 01:27 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Khonsu - 18-06-2009, 05:41 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 18-06-2009, 06:24 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 22-06-2009, 08:14 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 23-06-2009, 09:34 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 23-06-2009, 11:38 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 23-06-2009, 12:08 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Annya_Anna - 23-06-2009, 01:57 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 25-06-2009, 12:45 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de adyna_45 - 25-06-2009, 01:32 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 03-07-2009, 12:45 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de adyna_45 - 03-07-2009, 08:22 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 07-07-2009, 02:41 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Bad Blood. - 07-07-2009, 04:05 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 08-07-2009, 09:07 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 08-07-2009, 10:35 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 09-07-2009, 12:31 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 13-07-2009, 08:29 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Summer - 13-07-2009, 09:00 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-07-2009, 08:28 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Dark~Melody - 20-07-2009, 11:19 AM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de adyna_45 - 21-07-2009, 09:11 AM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 21-07-2009, 04:19 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 25-07-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 26-07-2009, 07:46 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Summer - 26-07-2009, 11:39 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de SoUl EaTeR - 27-07-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 27-07-2009, 06:42 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 28-07-2009, 12:24 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 01-08-2009, 12:40 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de ~~YuRa~~ - 01-08-2009, 01:09 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Alisia-chan* - 01-08-2009, 02:22 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 01-08-2009, 09:53 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Summer - 02-08-2009, 09:34 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 03-08-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de goddess - 22-09-2009, 04:00 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 22-09-2009, 08:04 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 23-09-2009, 08:45 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de goddess - 19-10-2009, 09:18 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 19-10-2009, 10:01 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 02-11-2009, 10:55 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Whisper - 08-11-2009, 07:37 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de goddess - 15-11-2009, 01:47 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 15-11-2009, 02:02 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 15-11-2009, 03:38 PM

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