15-02-2011, 09:56 PM
Deci, multumesc ca mai anuntat si scuze de intarziere :D
ma c am lasat in ceata acest capitol dar, in cele din urma mi am revenit :)) (sa nu citesti niciodata ficuri la 12 noaptea moarta de somn)
Descrierea e buna si este bogata, naratiunea la fel iar dialogul a fost bun ( desi a fost doar o replica), greseli de tastare, n am prea fost atenta asa ca nu cred ca ai avut :"> :))
(ori cum tu nu gresesti ca mine :)) )
Astept nextul si sper sa ma anunti
Ja ne! :*
ma c am lasat in ceata acest capitol dar, in cele din urma mi am revenit :)) (sa nu citesti niciodata ficuri la 12 noaptea moarta de somn)
Descrierea e buna si este bogata, naratiunea la fel iar dialogul a fost bun ( desi a fost doar o replica), greseli de tastare, n am prea fost atenta asa ca nu cred ca ai avut :"> :))
(ori cum tu nu gresesti ca mine :)) )
Astept nextul si sper sa ma anunti
Ja ne! :*
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To the Edge of the Earth, It's a Brave New World from the last to the first
To the right, To the left, We will fight to the death
To the Edge of the Earth it's a Brave New World it's a Brave New World It's A Brave New World
A Brave New World
The war is won,
the war is won,
a brave new world
I am a simple girl and you're a crazy boy....we can be friends? [+16 / +18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...649&page=1
Inimile noastre bat ROCK [+16/+18] - http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php...548&page=1