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SWEET and SPICY

#92
Super tare capitolul !
Am ras pana aproape cadeam de pe scaun la partea asta :
Shojo Queen A scris:`Controlorii sa fie atenti,avem o persoana fara bilet la bord care e cam tacanita.Are cam 1 metru 60 – 1 metru 60 si ceva inaltime cu par rosu si ochi verzi , intr-o pereche de pantaloni de trening si un maieu alb.Aveti grija la croseul de stanga , ca Yamada si-a luat-o cica in bot de la ea’
Par rosu,ochi verzi,croseu de stanga,tacanita? Ok, deci stiu ca daca cineva mi-ar descrie aceste trasaturi mi-ar sari imediat in cap Yui,dar e normal nu?Cate roscate cu atitudine am cunoscut eu?Totusi,m-am gandit la ea fiindca e singura pe care o stiu cu trasaturile astea,sau pentru ca mi-e dor deja de ea si vreau s-o vad?
Ma ridic de pe locul meu incercand sa uit de ea si ma indrept spre toaleta.Ies din compartiment si ajung pe holul care leaga cele doua vagoane si mi se inmoaie la propriu picioarele de soc.Prin geamul usii celuilalt vagon o vedeam pe Yui cum alerga de nebuna urmarita de controlori.Nu,probabil am vedenii.Probabil e alta roscata,cu ochi verzi scrutatori,de inaltimea aia si cu bustul ala care pare mic dar defapt e....oh Doamne,e Yui !
Croseu de stanga=))
Greseli de tastare n'am vazut [ ei bn nici n'am prea cautat -,- ]
Descrierea , naratiunea si dialogul sunt superbe .
Concluzia : Astept Next'ul
Ganbate !



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 14-04-2009, 02:29 PM
RE: Sweet and Spicy - de Ryuu - 14-04-2009, 03:05 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 17-04-2009, 01:50 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Ryuu - 17-04-2009, 02:39 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-04-2009, 01:52 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 19-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 20-04-2009, 02:49 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 21-04-2009, 06:29 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 22-04-2009, 08:11 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 23-04-2009, 09:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 24-04-2009, 12:28 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 24-04-2009, 06:59 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 24-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 25-04-2009, 06:30 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 26-04-2009, 06:29 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 27-04-2009, 07:13 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Corina. - 28-04-2009, 03:06 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 28-04-2009, 09:19 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 29-04-2009, 10:13 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Corina. - 30-04-2009, 03:20 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 30-04-2009, 08:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Corina. - 30-04-2009, 10:33 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 01-05-2009, 04:03 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 02-05-2009, 03:24 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Kido - 04-05-2009, 04:49 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 04-05-2009, 08:26 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 05-05-2009, 08:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 05-05-2009, 08:58 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 06-05-2009, 09:09 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 07-05-2009, 09:36 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 08-05-2009, 08:06 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 09-05-2009, 09:20 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 10-05-2009, 10:27 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 10-05-2009, 08:40 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 10-05-2009, 08:55 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Yuki4ever - 10-05-2009, 09:22 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 11-05-2009, 09:53 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 13-05-2009, 06:32 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 13-05-2009, 09:35 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 15-05-2009, 12:51 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-05-2009, 07:20 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de fake_fate - 18-05-2009, 10:19 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 22-05-2009, 09:08 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 24-05-2009, 05:38 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 24-05-2009, 05:50 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de fake_fate - 24-05-2009, 06:24 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 26-05-2009, 09:47 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 28-05-2009, 05:08 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 30-05-2009, 09:59 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de wasp - 03-06-2009, 10:22 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Annya_Anna - 08-06-2009, 02:03 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 10-06-2009, 04:14 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 11-06-2009, 03:56 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de fake_fate - 11-06-2009, 10:46 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 13-06-2009, 02:31 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 14-06-2009, 10:25 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 15-06-2009, 03:55 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 15-06-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de iuliana - 17-06-2009, 07:11 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 17-06-2009, 08:45 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-06-2009, 12:56 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 18-06-2009, 01:27 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Khonsu - 18-06-2009, 05:41 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 18-06-2009, 06:24 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 22-06-2009, 08:14 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 23-06-2009, 09:34 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 23-06-2009, 11:38 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 23-06-2009, 12:08 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Annya_Anna - 23-06-2009, 01:57 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 25-06-2009, 12:45 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de adyna_45 - 25-06-2009, 01:32 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 03-07-2009, 12:45 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de adyna_45 - 03-07-2009, 08:22 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 07-07-2009, 02:41 AM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Bad Blood. - 07-07-2009, 04:05 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 08-07-2009, 09:07 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 08-07-2009, 10:35 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 09-07-2009, 12:31 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 13-07-2009, 08:29 PM
RE: SWEET and SPICY - de Summer - 13-07-2009, 09:00 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 18-07-2009, 08:28 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Dark~Melody - 20-07-2009, 11:19 AM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de adyna_45 - 21-07-2009, 09:11 AM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 21-07-2009, 04:19 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 25-07-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 26-07-2009, 07:46 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Summer - 26-07-2009, 11:39 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de SoUl EaTeR - 27-07-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 27-07-2009, 06:42 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 28-07-2009, 12:24 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Shojo Queen - 01-08-2009, 12:40 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de ~~YuRa~~ - 01-08-2009, 01:09 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Alisia-chan* - 01-08-2009, 02:22 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 01-08-2009, 09:53 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Summer - 02-08-2009, 09:34 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Zambet.cOlOrAt - 03-08-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de goddess - 22-09-2009, 04:00 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de ~Anna~ - 22-09-2009, 08:04 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 23-09-2009, 08:45 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de goddess - 19-10-2009, 09:18 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 19-10-2009, 10:01 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de chrissta - 02-11-2009, 10:55 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Whisper - 08-11-2009, 07:37 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de goddess - 15-11-2009, 01:47 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Just Sugar - 15-11-2009, 02:02 PM
RE: [original]SWEET and SPICY - de Aiumy - 15-11-2009, 03:38 PM

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