Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi)

Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi)

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02-08-2008, 03:42 PM

Yee! Me wants yaoi! Me perv!:perv:

Deci..critica:
1.Ai grija la unele formulari,nu-mi suna bine, te-as ruga sa mai citesti o data ceea ce scrii, sau macar sa arunci cu privirea.(Mda...eu vorbesc:)) )
2.Unele descrieri merita inflorite, nu lasa sentimentele sa treaca pe langa personaje.
3.Greseli gramaticale nu am prea vazut...bravo.
4. (cea de care depinde viata ta:smart: ) Pune continuarea cat mai repede.

Ja Na!

The old bastard left his ties and his suit
A brown box, mothballs and bowling shoes

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Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 29-07-2008, 05:58 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 29-07-2008, 10:40 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de YUKIxSHUICHI - 30-07-2008, 12:10 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 30-07-2008, 04:06 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de bastard_in_love - 30-07-2008, 04:15 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 31-07-2008, 12:49 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 02-08-2008, 12:48 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de bastard_in_love - 02-08-2008, 03:42 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 02-08-2008, 05:55 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 06-08-2008, 09:41 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de originalcopy - 10-08-2008, 08:21 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 16-08-2008, 11:16 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de bastard_in_love - 16-08-2008, 11:23 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 17-08-2008, 03:30 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 17-08-2008, 03:42 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 30-08-2008, 12:01 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 06-09-2008, 11:39 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de bastard_in_love - 07-09-2008, 10:47 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de October - 19-09-2008, 05:15 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 19-09-2008, 11:31 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 20-09-2008, 01:35 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de October - 21-09-2008, 01:08 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 27-09-2008, 06:59 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Kakashi_IrukaYAOI - 28-09-2008, 03:44 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de October - 28-09-2008, 07:32 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de bastard_in_love - 03-10-2008, 05:13 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 12-10-2008, 09:55 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 13-10-2008, 12:26 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Candy_Mirage_of_Blaze - 25-10-2008, 12:29 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Luzer - 27-10-2008, 07:53 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Kitsune's Iris - 28-10-2008, 08:56 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Luzer - 07-11-2008, 05:27 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de myuu - 13-11-2008, 10:27 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Ice_angel_234 - 19-11-2008, 01:22 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Luzer - 19-11-2008, 07:14 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de myuu - 19-11-2008, 09:19 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ony-chy - 30-11-2008, 02:10 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de bastard_in_love - 11-12-2008, 09:49 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Kitsune's Iris - 12-12-2008, 09:28 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Luzer - 27-12-2008, 03:25 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de ...:::LexXutzuo_O_o:::... - 04-01-2009, 02:43 AM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de Argenta - 18-01-2009, 08:42 PM

RE: Detectiv indragostit(L&Light)(shonen-ai,yaoi) - de chrissta - 23-04-2009, 09:41 PM

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