07-12-2009, 09:42 PM
Salutik!:-)..
well....si de aceasta data un capitol extraordinar, modurile de expunere se imbina frumos, limbaj destul de artistic, iar marimea capitolului este chiar OK, destul cat sa imi satisfac "pofta" de citit :D...
altceva...fii atenta la greselile de tastare si la repetitii, ai anumite pasaje in care spui acelasi lucru de prea multe ori...si devine sacaitor :|
:">....well...astept cu nerabdare >:D<
spor la scris!:*
:bye:
well....si de aceasta data un capitol extraordinar, modurile de expunere se imbina frumos, limbaj destul de artistic, iar marimea capitolului este chiar OK, destul cat sa imi satisfac "pofta" de citit :D...
altceva...fii atenta la greselile de tastare si la repetitii, ai anumite pasaje in care spui acelasi lucru de prea multe ori...si devine sacaitor :|
Citat:Deci Minnie nu ma stresezi deloc, chiar imi face placere. O sa vezi, trebuie sa ai putina rabdare.
:">....well...astept cu nerabdare >:D<
spor la scris!:*
:bye:
My fic:
Predestined paths : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13338
[naruto]Teenagers : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13050 (finish
)
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Predestined paths : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13338
[naruto]Teenagers : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13050 (finish
)I wish to meet you again next time
Love is more selfish the deeper it gets
until you want to tie each breath down
unreasonable, yet...
We climb a spiral of light
the red memory is a poisonous tattoo
a tattoo that shows the future's chaos
if we're together, until we shatter
Love is more selfish the deeper it gets
until you want to tie each breath down
unreasonable, yet...
We climb a spiral of light
the red memory is a poisonous tattoo
a tattoo that shows the future's chaos
if we're together, until we shatter