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You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi]

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#73
08-06-2009, 06:31 PM
Yey in sfarsit continuarea:X. Am asteptat atat de mult si acum ca am vazut-o chiar sub ochii mei nu m-am putut abtine sa nu citesc oricat de obosita as fi.
Deci, te rog, nu-mi spune ca iar Ren va fi cu Yuzi. Nu mai vreau! Acum el e fericit alaturi de Larry si au o relatie foarte stransa. Nu te las sa-i mai desparti chiar daca Yuzi inca il mai iubeste pe Ren, iar Niris pe Larry. Sper ca nu ai de gand sa-i desparti:o3
Acum sa-ti zic cateva greseli pe care am reusit sa le observ.
"paşi erpezi"- "paşi repezi"
"tot odată"- "totodată"
"Mai important este că nici mie nu îmi pasă de nimeni şi, data viitoare când se întâmplă să îmi mai adresezi ceva, nu ştiu cum voi reactiona, stau prost cu nervii."
"Uite ce e puştiule, asta a fost pentru Mitsue, că o vei face să sufere." - iti recomand sa spui "Uite ce e, puştiule, asta a fost pentru că o vei face să sufere pe Mitsue." cred ca suna mai bine:D
"soruta"- "soru-ta"
Si ultima fraza din text are aproape 4 randuri. Trebuia sa o desparti in propozitii pentru ca, asa lunga cum e, este mai greu de inteles.
Atat am avut sa-ti spun, succes mai departe :bye:
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 31-07-2008, 12:57 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 31-07-2008, 11:34 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-08-2008, 06:57 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 09-08-2008, 01:17 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 22-08-2008, 11:07 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 24-08-2008, 10:57 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 27-08-2008, 02:37 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 17-01-2009, 01:30 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 17-01-2009, 10:41 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 24-01-2009, 02:24 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 24-01-2009, 06:59 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-02-2009, 11:12 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 01-02-2009, 03:39 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-02-2009, 05:11 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 01-02-2009, 06:45 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 03-02-2009, 09:10 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 03-02-2009, 09:51 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 04-02-2009, 07:33 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 05-02-2009, 01:56 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-02-2009, 11:36 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 07-02-2009, 07:15 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 14-02-2009, 12:47 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-02-2009, 12:17 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 15-02-2009, 02:18 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-02-2009, 04:40 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 21-02-2009, 12:31 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 22-02-2009, 02:06 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 28-02-2009, 02:07 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 28-02-2009, 09:42 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-03-2009, 02:25 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 08-03-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 08-03-2009, 10:02 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 14-03-2009, 06:40 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 15-03-2009, 08:13 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-03-2009, 09:06 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 20-03-2009, 09:28 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 28-03-2009, 04:38 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 02-04-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 03-04-2009, 11:42 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 03-04-2009, 11:59 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de love_anime - 04-04-2009, 02:15 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 04-04-2009, 06:31 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 05-04-2009, 12:49 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 05-04-2009, 01:20 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 10-04-2009, 11:13 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 11-04-2009, 12:30 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 11-04-2009, 02:56 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-05-2009, 03:31 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 02-05-2009, 05:21 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 08-06-2009, 12:00 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 08-06-2009, 06:31 PM

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