21-03-2009, 03:27 PM
O da....
Ideea este super tare.Imi place mult.Ce nu mi-a placut a fost chestia cu "acuma".E cam stresanta stii?Si mi s-a parut ca te-ai repetat cu Sakura, Sakura, Sakura.
In fine.Am vazut ca nu ai pus cratima in unele locuri dar in rest e bine.Descrierea putea fi putin mai buna si mai multa si dialogul la fel.
Imi place cum gandesti si sper sa-l continui cat mai curand.
Bye!
Ideea este super tare.Imi place mult.Ce nu mi-a placut a fost chestia cu "acuma".E cam stresanta stii?Si mi s-a parut ca te-ai repetat cu Sakura, Sakura, Sakura.
In fine.Am vazut ca nu ai pus cratima in unele locuri dar in rest e bine.Descrierea putea fi putin mai buna si mai multa si dialogul la fel.
Imi place cum gandesti si sper sa-l continui cat mai curand.
Bye!
, chibi-ul lui miss_sakura_uchiha[font=Tahoma]
'Cause I luw my two susy ....:::SasuSaku:::...., and ^^"Bubbles"^^ And my family is too big^^ (only girlz) Sunt mandra rau mey voi, am o moomy cea mai tare.^^ Yes, you Mitzuke-chan
http://media.photobucket.com/image/hitsu...22.jpg?o=3
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[b]He is mine!*MINE*''Cuz I can't have Deidara (he's Akatsuna Lynn's) and I have Sasuke I decide to have and this anime hot boy^^
Ha, ha, hi, hi, ha, ha, ho!
Why I like Sasuke-kun?It's simple!He is so hot, the most beautiful, powerful, clever and again is the most beautiful^^He is mine and you can't do anything^^
I say again and the last time: Hitsugaya-kun si MINE!!! ONLY MINE!!! GET IT?