Cerere de Critics

Cerere de Critics

Lucifer Deconectat

Prince Of Pride

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#190

10-01-2012, 12:08 AM

(26-12-2011, 01:01 AM)Lucifer A scris: Nick : Lucifer
Link la fic: Memento Non Mori
Pagina din topic a capitolului/Tot ficul: Tot ficul(daca se poate)
Numar capitole : 7-8
Sectiunea : Proza .

Gen critica: nu ma intereseaza greselile de tastare, diacriticele uitate, greselile gramaticale nevoite si din neatentie si nimic din aceasta sfera. sunt constient ca acestea exista insa de ele ma voi ocupa la timpul potrivit. Vreau o critica axata pe descriere, actiune si personaje. Sper ca cineva sa accepte provocarea.

well a trecut ceva timp de cand am facut comanda...as vrea sa stiu daca se mai ocupa cineva de ea sau nu. daca nu se poate inteleg, sunt destul de multe capitole si dimensiunea lor este ceva mai mare asa ca nu este nici o suparare.

I will fight, one more fight
Don't break down in front of me.
I will fight, one more fight
I am not the enemy.
I will try one last time
Are you listening to me?
I will fight, the last fight
I am not your enemy.
Fiction:
Memento Non Mori
Iris Infinit
Midnight Waltz
Retroversus

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