Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery

Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery

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#60

18-03-2011, 11:27 PM

Hey sis ^^. Intr'un sfarsit am ajuns la fic ^^. Mi'a placut nextul nu am ce zice. Vorba lui DeDal este superb xD. M'a bufnit rasul la ,,- Aaron, ascultÄƒ-mÄƒ pentru cÄƒ e foarte grav. Eu am uitat sÄƒ plÄƒtesc factura!". A mai fost o faza la care am zambit dar nu mai stiu care. Descrierea a fost prezenta in cantitati normale, nici prea multa nici prea putina. Naratiunea a fost si ea foarte frumoasa. Actiunea nu a fost grabita si dialogul nu a fost grabit. Greseli de tastare nu am vazut deci e bine. So, nu mai am ce sa spun. Astept nextu si nu uitati sa ma anuntati. Bye! :*

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Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de DeDal N. - 26-01-2011, 06:05 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 26-01-2011, 06:18 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 26-01-2011, 07:29 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Liar - 26-01-2011, 08:36 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de SnowFlake. - 30-01-2011, 03:59 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 30-01-2011, 04:29 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Stormrage - 30-01-2011, 07:57 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de n{iK}a aMmA - 31-01-2011, 01:01 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Mdn. - 31-01-2011, 01:35 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de DeDal N. - 31-01-2011, 03:29 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Dufresne - 31-01-2011, 03:47 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de n{iK}a aMmA - 31-01-2011, 04:41 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 31-01-2011, 05:37 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 31-01-2011, 05:39 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 31-01-2011, 06:22 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de SnowFlake. - 01-02-2011, 05:26 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 01-02-2011, 05:32 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 01-02-2011, 05:34 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 01-02-2011, 05:38 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de n{iK}a aMmA - 01-02-2011, 06:34 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Mdn. - 01-02-2011, 07:09 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de â™¥Green.Irisâ™¥ - 02-02-2011, 09:39 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de DeDal N. - 03-02-2011, 06:47 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 03-02-2011, 07:03 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 03-02-2011, 07:07 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 03-02-2011, 08:04 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de SnowFlake. - 04-02-2011, 05:59 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Dufresne - 04-02-2011, 06:00 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 04-02-2011, 06:00 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 04-02-2011, 06:00 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de n{iK}a aMmA - 04-02-2011, 06:29 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de DeDal N. - 05-02-2011, 12:30 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de n{iK}a aMmA - 05-02-2011, 12:35 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 05-02-2011, 05:40 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 05-02-2011, 05:55 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Dufresne - 05-02-2011, 06:17 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 06-02-2011, 06:06 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 07-02-2011, 02:50 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de SnowFlake. - 12-02-2011, 12:54 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 12-02-2011, 12:59 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de n{iK}a aMmA - 12-02-2011, 01:16 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 12-02-2011, 01:26 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Layla. - 12-02-2011, 08:24 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 13-02-2011, 05:57 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 13-02-2011, 07:58 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de DeDal N. - 18-02-2011, 12:46 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de n{iK}a aMmA - 18-02-2011, 01:03 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 18-02-2011, 10:40 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 18-02-2011, 10:58 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de AlerimxD - 18-02-2011, 05:53 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 18-02-2011, 11:50 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de DeDal N. - 05-03-2011, 08:21 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 05-03-2011, 08:31 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 05-03-2011, 10:54 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 06-03-2011, 01:23 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de DeDal N. - 10-03-2011, 10:01 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 11-03-2011, 12:44 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 11-03-2011, 10:01 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de SnowFlake. - 18-03-2011, 09:00 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 18-03-2011, 11:27 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 19-03-2011, 12:00 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 20-03-2011, 12:19 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de SnowFlake. - 10-04-2011, 03:08 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 22-04-2011, 07:39 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 10-04-2011, 03:37 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 11-04-2011, 12:40 AM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de SnowFlake. - 30-04-2011, 03:29 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Vero - 30-04-2011, 03:43 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de .Dudiii - 30-04-2011, 05:34 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Addeh - 01-05-2011, 12:48 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de Kayla. - 01-05-2011, 06:11 PM

RE: Pain and Pleasure [yaoi, +18] DeDal N. & Midnight Mistery - de dot dot curve :) - 03-09-2011, 06:40 PM

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