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O petala de cires

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Hey SmileyMIley!Ai un inceput promitator,dar ai trebui sa ai grija cu semnele de punctuatie....imi place ca dialogul nu e asa de sec gen:"Buna!"Buna!"..sau ceva de genul asta sti tu cum e...ma rog descriere ai ...tot restul e bine...ma mira faptul ca ai scris atat de mult din primul capitol,avand in vedere ca ai dor 11 ani...macar ne lasi in suspans astept nextu..
I'll never say never for a thing...
If i never'd never tryed it
I'll never say never for a way...
If its the far way
And i'll never say never for a friend..
If i'd never meet that person

Love,Live and Enjoy the life...

This time, This place
Misused, Mistakes
Too long, Too late
Who was I to make you wait
Just one chance
Just one breath
Just in case there's just one left
'Cause you know,
You know, you know

[Chorus]
That I love you
I have loved you all along
And I miss you
Been far away for far too long
I keep dreaming you'll be with me
And you'll never go
Stop breathing if
I don't see you anymore

On my knees, I'll ask
Last chance for one last dance
'Cause with you, I'd withstand
All of hell to hold your hand
I'd give it all
I'd give for us
Give anything but I won't give up
'Cause you know,
You know, you know

[Chorus]

So far away
Been far away for far too long
So far away
Been far away for far too long
But you know, you know, you know

I wanted
I wanted you to stay
'Cause I needed
I need to hear you say
That I love you
I have loved you all along
And I forgive you
For being away for far too long
So keep breathing
'Cause I'm not leaving
Hold on to me and, never let me go




Răspunsuri în acest subiect
O petala de cires - de Yin - 17-08-2010, 06:29 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Roney - 19-08-2010, 03:10 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Yin - 19-08-2010, 09:10 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Yun. - 20-08-2010, 12:28 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de nimeni - 20-08-2010, 01:26 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Ada - 21-08-2010, 03:18 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Yin - 22-08-2010, 07:12 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Debb.' - 22-08-2010, 08:02 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Yun. - 22-08-2010, 10:04 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Yin - 25-08-2010, 10:39 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Debb.' - 25-08-2010, 11:08 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Yin - 05-09-2010, 12:50 PM
RE: O petala de cires (sasusaku) - de Debb.' - 05-09-2010, 01:05 PM

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