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nasol...lasa-te
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hm......
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asa si asa
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ok, mai trebuie lucrat
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foarte bine, super misto
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Aripi insangerate

#39
HeLLo :3
Am ajuns si eu pe aici...si asa am promis ca iti spun parerea mea nu?
Deci ca sa vorbesc despre tot fic`ul treubie sa spun ca imi place tare mult
Actiunea este foarte interesanta si mereu sunt surprinsa de la un capitol la altul
Imi place mult cum narezi evenimentele, pur si simplu textul capata un anume farmec
Si acum sa vorbesc si despre acest capitol...
El este foarte interesant si bine alcatuit dar sunt unele repetitii sau greseli de exprimare. Oricum nu sunt cine stie ce erori care sa te ingrijoreze sau asa ceva
Abia astept next`ul. Spor la scris si multa inspiratie :*
Zbye:3
KyuMin.



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 06:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 11:08 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de ~X~LoVeLeSs~X~ - 16-09-2009, 10:29 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 19-09-2009, 10:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Zyspar - 20-09-2009, 12:24 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-09-2009, 10:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-09-2009, 02:23 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-09-2009, 09:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-09-2009, 08:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 02-10-2009, 04:31 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-10-2009, 10:32 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-10-2009, 10:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-10-2009, 10:09 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-10-2009, 09:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-10-2009, 02:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-10-2009, 12:44 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-10-2009, 01:12 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-11-2009, 03:30 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-11-2009, 05:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-11-2009, 08:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-11-2009, 12:45 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-11-2009, 01:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 25-11-2009, 03:05 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 30-11-2009, 02:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-12-2009, 01:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-12-2009, 04:28 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 04-12-2009, 04:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-12-2009, 11:12 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 07-12-2009, 09:42 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-12-2009, 03:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-12-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 14-12-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-12-2009, 11:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 16-12-2009, 08:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-12-2009, 12:33 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2009, 03:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2009, 12:51 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 22-12-2009, 11:42 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de A'Svear - 23-12-2009, 08:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 24-12-2009, 02:08 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-12-2009, 05:14 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 25-12-2009, 12:14 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-12-2009, 02:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 26-12-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-12-2009, 01:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 29-12-2009, 07:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 30-12-2009, 03:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-01-2010, 12:37 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 15-01-2010, 08:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-01-2010, 11:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-01-2010, 11:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-02-2010, 02:19 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 06-02-2010, 12:52 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de marya - 06-02-2010, 03:36 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Aly - 10-02-2010, 02:51 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-02-2010, 08:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 12-02-2010, 11:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-02-2010, 01:48 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 19-02-2010, 11:07 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-03-2010, 05:44 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 11-03-2010, 10:37 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-03-2010, 07:36 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-03-2010, 01:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-03-2010, 02:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 01-04-2010, 12:06 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-04-2010, 10:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 09-04-2010, 04:20 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-04-2010, 03:31 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-04-2010, 12:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 17-04-2010, 12:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-04-2010, 05:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 22-04-2010, 03:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 22-04-2010, 05:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-04-2010, 07:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 03-05-2010, 06:05 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-05-2010, 09:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 11-05-2010, 09:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-06-2010, 08:41 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 04-06-2010, 04:54 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 05-06-2010, 04:07 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-06-2010, 01:27 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-06-2010, 04:48 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-07-2010, 05:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de dark.blue - 04-07-2010, 04:15 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 05-07-2010, 08:40 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-07-2010, 08:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-07-2010, 01:49 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-07-2010, 02:55 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-08-2010, 12:33 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de dark.blue - 10-08-2010, 10:39 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-08-2010, 06:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-08-2010, 08:48 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 27-08-2010, 08:45 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Akane Hime - 01-09-2010, 08:22 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 23-09-2010, 03:27 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 23-09-2010, 07:59 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 22-10-2010, 03:28 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-11-2010, 09:40 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 14-11-2010, 07:13 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 23-11-2010, 10:00 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2010, 04:49 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 18-12-2010, 05:32 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 18-12-2010, 10:04 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Hanna2300 - 18-12-2010, 10:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 19-12-2010, 03:16 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2010, 11:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 21-12-2010, 12:19 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 21-12-2010, 07:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 22-12-2010, 09:38 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 24-12-2010, 02:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-01-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 08-01-2011, 04:39 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-01-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 30-01-2011, 04:43 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 08-02-2011, 08:11 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 13-02-2011, 04:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 13-02-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 13-02-2011, 07:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 19-02-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 19-02-2011, 06:50 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 19-02-2011, 11:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 20-02-2011, 05:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-03-2011, 07:52 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 18-03-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 19-03-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 23-03-2011, 05:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-04-2011, 07:50 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 01-04-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 01-04-2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 06-04-2011, 02:37 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-05-2011, 07:37 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 04-05-2011, 08:43 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 29-05-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 13-06-2011, 07:00 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 13-06-2011, 10:27 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 15-06-2011, 09:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-07-2011, 02:54 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 06-07-2011, 04:25 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 16-07-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-08-2011, 07:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 21-08-2011, 03:06 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-09-2011, 05:01 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-10-2011, 10:17 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de ciupaciup - 12-10-2011, 06:23 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 15-10-2011, 04:49 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 30-10-2011, 12:59 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 07-02-2012, 12:35 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 08-02-2012, 01:46 AM

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