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Aripi insangerate

#24
Bunaaaa!:D

well...de curiozitate am dat si eu pe la ficul tau si ce pot sa spun ca sunt de-a dreptul impresionata, o poveste plina de suspans, plina de actiune, invaluita in mister si foarte complexa; felicitarile mele:bv:
modurile de expunere se imbina armonios: descriere ai din belsug presurata cu figuri de stil, imi place ca te exprimi foarte usor si transmiti in acelasi timp mesaje usor de inteles, doar ca uneori te pierzi in detalii si da o usoara tenta de plictiseala; dialogul foarte bine plasat si contine replici bine alese, sigure si unele chiar comice; actiunea nu mi se pare grabita, urmeaza un curs normal, iar in ceea ce priveste greselile de tastare, am depistat cateva dar nu-i cine stie ce doar sa fii mai atenta cand reciteste capitolul
ideea ficului este foarte originala, chiar complexa, detalii puse la punct, informatii, chiar ma face sa cred ca aceasta nu este o simpla poveste:blushing: si ma face sa vreau sa citesc din ce in ce mai mult :D
altceva....aa..sincera sa fiu eu o vedeam pe Yuri cu Hissori, nicidecum cu Ikusa :-?, dar in fond e povestea ta si decurge dupa bunul tau plac :>

spor la scris! ast nextul!:*
kiss&byeeeee
My fic:
Predestined paths : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13338
[naruto]Teenagers : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13050 (finish 4)

[Imagine: anime-kiss.jpg]
I wish to meet you again next time
Love is more selfish the deeper it gets
until you want to tie each breath down
unreasonable, yet...

We climb a spiral of light
the red memory is a poisonous tattoo
a tattoo that shows the future's chaos
if we're together, until we shatter



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 06:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 11:08 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de ~X~LoVeLeSs~X~ - 16-09-2009, 10:29 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 19-09-2009, 10:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Zyspar - 20-09-2009, 12:24 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-09-2009, 10:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-09-2009, 02:23 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-09-2009, 09:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-09-2009, 08:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 02-10-2009, 04:31 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-10-2009, 10:32 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-10-2009, 10:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-10-2009, 10:09 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-10-2009, 09:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-10-2009, 02:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-10-2009, 12:44 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-10-2009, 01:12 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-11-2009, 03:30 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-11-2009, 05:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-11-2009, 08:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-11-2009, 12:45 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-11-2009, 01:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 25-11-2009, 03:05 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 30-11-2009, 02:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-12-2009, 01:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-12-2009, 04:28 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 04-12-2009, 04:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-12-2009, 11:12 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 07-12-2009, 09:42 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-12-2009, 03:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-12-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 14-12-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-12-2009, 11:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 16-12-2009, 08:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-12-2009, 12:33 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2009, 03:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2009, 12:51 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 22-12-2009, 11:42 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de A'Svear - 23-12-2009, 08:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 24-12-2009, 02:08 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-12-2009, 05:14 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 25-12-2009, 12:14 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-12-2009, 02:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 26-12-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-12-2009, 01:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 29-12-2009, 07:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 30-12-2009, 03:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-01-2010, 12:37 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 15-01-2010, 08:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-01-2010, 11:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-01-2010, 11:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-02-2010, 02:19 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 06-02-2010, 12:52 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de marya - 06-02-2010, 03:36 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Aly - 10-02-2010, 02:51 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-02-2010, 08:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 12-02-2010, 11:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-02-2010, 01:48 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 19-02-2010, 11:07 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-03-2010, 05:44 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 11-03-2010, 10:37 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-03-2010, 07:36 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-03-2010, 01:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-03-2010, 02:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 01-04-2010, 12:06 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-04-2010, 10:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 09-04-2010, 04:20 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-04-2010, 03:31 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-04-2010, 12:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 17-04-2010, 12:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-04-2010, 05:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 22-04-2010, 03:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 22-04-2010, 05:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-04-2010, 07:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 03-05-2010, 06:05 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-05-2010, 09:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 11-05-2010, 09:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-06-2010, 08:41 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 04-06-2010, 04:54 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 05-06-2010, 04:07 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-06-2010, 01:27 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-06-2010, 04:48 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-07-2010, 05:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de dark.blue - 04-07-2010, 04:15 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 05-07-2010, 08:40 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-07-2010, 08:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-07-2010, 01:49 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-07-2010, 02:55 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-08-2010, 12:33 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de dark.blue - 10-08-2010, 10:39 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-08-2010, 06:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-08-2010, 08:48 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 27-08-2010, 08:45 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Akane Hime - 01-09-2010, 08:22 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 23-09-2010, 03:27 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 23-09-2010, 07:59 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 22-10-2010, 03:28 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-11-2010, 09:40 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 14-11-2010, 07:13 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 23-11-2010, 10:00 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2010, 04:49 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 18-12-2010, 05:32 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 18-12-2010, 10:04 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Hanna2300 - 18-12-2010, 10:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 19-12-2010, 03:16 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2010, 11:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 21-12-2010, 12:19 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 21-12-2010, 07:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 22-12-2010, 09:38 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 24-12-2010, 02:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-01-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 08-01-2011, 04:39 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-01-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 30-01-2011, 04:43 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 08-02-2011, 08:11 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 13-02-2011, 04:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 13-02-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 13-02-2011, 07:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 19-02-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 19-02-2011, 06:50 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 19-02-2011, 11:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 20-02-2011, 05:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-03-2011, 07:52 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 18-03-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 19-03-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 23-03-2011, 05:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-04-2011, 07:50 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 01-04-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 01-04-2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 06-04-2011, 02:37 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-05-2011, 07:37 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 04-05-2011, 08:43 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 29-05-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 13-06-2011, 07:00 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 13-06-2011, 10:27 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 15-06-2011, 09:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-07-2011, 02:54 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 06-07-2011, 04:25 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 16-07-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-08-2011, 07:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 21-08-2011, 03:06 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-09-2011, 05:01 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-10-2011, 10:17 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de ciupaciup - 12-10-2011, 06:23 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 15-10-2011, 04:49 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 30-10-2011, 12:59 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 07-02-2012, 12:35 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 08-02-2012, 01:46 AM

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