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nasol...lasa-te
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asa si asa
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ok, mai trebuie lucrat
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Aripi insangerate

Cat de adorabil...dar inca nu i`a spus decizia Consiliului. Da, am zis ca astept, dar stii ca eu nu am niciodata rabdare...dar, banuiesc ca nu am de ales.

Imi place ca desi narezi la persoana a III-a reusesti sa descrii perfect sentimentele si starile a mai multor personaje in acelasi capitol. Imi place ca descrii perfect gesturile si subintelesul acestora. Impreuna, acestea doua te ajuta sa ne prezinti o imagine complexa a actiunilor din fic, desigur, si faptul ca descrii si decorul perfect, dar eu de obicei nu sunt prea atenta la asta:D
Ador ideea, o alta capodopera a ta, si modul in care decurg lucrurile. Imi place faptul ca desi ai mai multe porsonaje importante, nu incarci capitolele si prezinti intamplarile pe rand, si chiar daca unele capitole sunt mai scurte, nu par seci.

Si...Se putea sa nu ma holb eu dupa greseli de tastare?:)) Here:
roÅŸiu - rosu
m-ai - program, neprogram, e greseala si trebuie sa ti`o spun: e mai, in context

Multumesc ca ti`ai facut timp sa postezi, si spor la scris>:D<
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 06:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-09-2009, 11:08 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de ~X~LoVeLeSs~X~ - 16-09-2009, 10:29 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 19-09-2009, 10:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Zyspar - 20-09-2009, 12:24 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-09-2009, 10:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-09-2009, 02:23 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-09-2009, 09:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-09-2009, 08:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 02-10-2009, 04:31 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-10-2009, 10:32 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-10-2009, 10:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-10-2009, 10:09 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-10-2009, 09:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-10-2009, 02:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-10-2009, 12:44 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 27-10-2009, 01:12 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-11-2009, 03:30 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-11-2009, 05:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-11-2009, 08:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-11-2009, 12:45 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-11-2009, 01:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 25-11-2009, 03:05 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 30-11-2009, 02:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-12-2009, 01:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-12-2009, 04:28 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 04-12-2009, 04:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-12-2009, 11:12 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 07-12-2009, 09:42 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-12-2009, 03:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-12-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 14-12-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-12-2009, 11:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 16-12-2009, 08:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-12-2009, 12:33 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2009, 03:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2009, 12:51 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 22-12-2009, 11:42 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de A'Svear - 23-12-2009, 08:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 24-12-2009, 02:08 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 24-12-2009, 05:14 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 25-12-2009, 12:14 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-12-2009, 02:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 26-12-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-12-2009, 01:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Axxa.No.Way - 29-12-2009, 07:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 30-12-2009, 03:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 15-01-2010, 12:37 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 15-01-2010, 08:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-01-2010, 11:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-01-2010, 11:29 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-02-2010, 02:19 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 06-02-2010, 12:52 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de marya - 06-02-2010, 03:36 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Aly - 10-02-2010, 02:51 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-02-2010, 08:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 12-02-2010, 11:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-02-2010, 01:48 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 19-02-2010, 11:07 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-03-2010, 05:44 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Minnie - 11-03-2010, 10:37 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 16-03-2010, 07:36 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-03-2010, 01:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-03-2010, 02:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 01-04-2010, 12:06 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 06-04-2010, 10:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 09-04-2010, 04:20 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-04-2010, 03:31 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-04-2010, 12:38 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 17-04-2010, 12:56 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-04-2010, 05:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 22-04-2010, 03:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 22-04-2010, 05:35 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 28-04-2010, 07:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 03-05-2010, 06:05 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-05-2010, 09:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 11-05-2010, 09:30 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-06-2010, 08:41 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 04-06-2010, 04:54 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de TrieuTriTrinh - 05-06-2010, 04:07 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-06-2010, 01:27 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 21-06-2010, 04:48 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-07-2010, 05:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de dark.blue - 04-07-2010, 04:15 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 05-07-2010, 08:40 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-07-2010, 08:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 11-07-2010, 01:49 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 12-07-2010, 02:55 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 05-08-2010, 12:33 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de dark.blue - 10-08-2010, 10:39 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-08-2010, 06:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 26-08-2010, 08:48 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 27-08-2010, 08:45 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Akane Hime - 01-09-2010, 08:22 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 23-09-2010, 03:27 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 23-09-2010, 07:59 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 22-10-2010, 03:28 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-11-2010, 09:40 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 14-11-2010, 07:13 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 23-11-2010, 10:00 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2010, 04:49 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 18-12-2010, 05:32 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 18-12-2010, 10:04 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Hanna2300 - 18-12-2010, 10:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 19-12-2010, 03:16 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 20-12-2010, 11:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 21-12-2010, 12:19 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 21-12-2010, 07:53 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 22-12-2010, 09:38 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 24-12-2010, 02:24 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 08-01-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 08-01-2011, 04:39 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 29-01-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Whisky - 30-01-2011, 04:43 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 08-02-2011, 08:11 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 13-02-2011, 04:06 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 13-02-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 13-02-2011, 07:34 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 19-02-2011, 04:18 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 19-02-2011, 06:50 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 19-02-2011, 11:20 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 20-02-2011, 05:09 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-03-2011, 07:52 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 18-03-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 19-03-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 23-03-2011, 05:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 01-04-2011, 07:50 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 01-04-2011, 09:47 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 01-04-2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Reine - 06-04-2011, 02:37 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 04-05-2011, 07:37 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 04-05-2011, 08:43 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 29-05-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 13-06-2011, 07:00 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 13-06-2011, 10:27 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 15-06-2011, 09:21 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 03-07-2011, 02:54 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Lanna - 06-07-2011, 04:25 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 16-07-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 17-08-2011, 07:19 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Dark Blue - 21-08-2011, 03:06 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 10-09-2011, 05:01 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 12-10-2011, 10:17 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de ciupaciup - 12-10-2011, 06:23 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Bad Blood. - 15-10-2011, 04:49 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 30-10-2011, 12:59 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 18-12-2011, 03:38 PM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de BloodyInnocence - 07-02-2012, 12:35 AM
RE: Aripi insangerate - de Katniss - 08-02-2012, 01:46 AM

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