22-03-2010, 09:38 PM
Ador`!!!! Imi place din ce in ce mai mult :))) Asa...... Am ramas gura casca cand am vazut ce credea Eric -un baiat- despre barbati o.O Like...OMG o.O!!
Si e asa un dulce , vrea sa para indiferent , si ... rece totodata ... dar defapt el o iubeste la fel de mult pe cat ea il iubeste ,ceea ce este bine:X xD
Si Rossie e la fel , vrea sa para ca nu-l iubeste , dar totusi ea e nebuna dupa el .... Sincer? Imi place extrem de mult:X Idee originala , clar!
Naratiune- perfecta , Dialog- e destul de bun , descriere- din plin :D Ai avut 2-3 greseli de tastare , nu cine stie ce ...:) :
umplă- umblă
aceaÅŸi- aceeaÅŸi
wera-era
:D
P.S: Astept next-u ! Bafta si spor la scris!:D
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[center]~Muzica, Moda, Totul Despre LOVE & SEX
Seara de Seara , la cel mai Tare Chef!!
Nici nu am belele, de parinti in cot ma doare,
Vara asta-i cea mai tare si distractia e-n Floare!~
~ And I bet that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic
So let me drive my body around you
I bet you know what I mean
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic ~
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Si e asa un dulce , vrea sa para indiferent , si ... rece totodata ... dar defapt el o iubeste la fel de mult pe cat ea il iubeste ,ceea ce este bine:X xD
Si Rossie e la fel , vrea sa para ca nu-l iubeste , dar totusi ea e nebuna dupa el .... Sincer? Imi place extrem de mult:X Idee originala , clar!
Naratiune- perfecta , Dialog- e destul de bun , descriere- din plin :D Ai avut 2-3 greseli de tastare , nu cine stie ce ...:) :
umplă- umblă
aceaÅŸi- aceeaÅŸi
wera-era
:D
P.S: Astept next-u ! Bafta si spor la scris!:D
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[center]~Muzica, Moda, Totul Despre LOVE & SEX
Seara de Seara , la cel mai Tare Chef!!
Nici nu am belele, de parinti in cot ma doare,
Vara asta-i cea mai tare si distractia e-n Floare!~
~ And I bet that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic
So let me drive my body around you
I bet you know what I mean
Cause you know that I can make you believe
In Love and Sex and Magic ~
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"If I died in your arms
Would you then give me your love
Would you tell me that you need me
and that I was the one
Now there's nothing I can say to you
To make you feel the same way too
When you walk away I just want to die
And I try not to break down and cry"
Would you then give me your love
Would you tell me that you need me
and that I was the one
Now there's nothing I can say to you
To make you feel the same way too
When you walk away I just want to die
And I try not to break down and cry"