[Terminat] Boys' love

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[Terminat] Boys' love

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15-06-2009, 01:22 AM

Hei am reusit si eu sa citesc ficul pana la sfarsit si am venit cu un comm mititel

Hm...o parere de ansambu...imi place cum scri pentru ca nu grabesti actiunea dar nici nu o lungesti prea mult, deci e numai bine. Descrierea e la locul ei si astfel nu-i simt lipsa, iar dialogul nu e sec sau atat de evident incat sa fie pus degeaba si asta poate sa insemne doar ca ai facut un fic reusit.
Finalul mi-a placut [ca orice happy end] si ma bucur ca cei doi au ramas impreuna in cele din urma.
Greselile nu am sa le mai corectez pentru ca nu au fost decat de tastare si oricum nu mai conteaza acum. Te astept cu alt fic si gambate mai departe ja bye

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[Terminat] Boys' love - de Yaoi Queen - 01-07-2008, 05:01 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Strawberry Ice - 01-07-2008, 09:48 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 04-07-2008, 02:31 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 05-07-2008, 10:22 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 05-07-2008, 10:43 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 05-07-2008, 11:30 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 11-07-2008, 11:17 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 11-07-2008, 12:30 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 17-07-2008, 05:43 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 17-07-2008, 06:07 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Miharu - 17-07-2008, 06:29 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Ice_angel_234 - 23-07-2008, 09:54 PM

RE: áƒ¦áƒ¦Boys' Loveáƒ¦áƒ¦ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 25-07-2008, 06:28 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de bastard_in_love - 26-07-2008, 06:14 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 04-08-2008, 11:34 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 04-08-2008, 11:48 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de bastard_in_love - 05-08-2008, 02:56 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 01-09-2008, 01:26 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Lye - 01-09-2008, 02:49 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 21-09-2008, 12:20 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Ice_angel_234 - 22-09-2008, 05:07 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Sol - 22-09-2008, 08:40 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 30-09-2008, 03:44 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de ThorthKa - 21-10-2008, 09:48 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Kitsune's Iris - 22-10-2008, 02:17 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 01-11-2008, 06:00 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 03-11-2008, 09:31 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 23-11-2008, 02:37 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 23-11-2008, 02:15 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 07-12-2008, 06:42 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de bastard_in_love - 09-12-2008, 04:30 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 09-12-2008, 08:07 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 10-12-2008, 11:55 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 11-12-2008, 01:35 AM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 15-12-2008, 11:56 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 16-12-2008, 02:32 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de bastard_in_love - 16-12-2008, 05:00 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de KYM - 21-12-2008, 01:36 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 16-01-2009, 12:38 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de bastard_in_love - 16-01-2009, 02:47 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de myuu - 16-01-2009, 08:57 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 26-01-2009, 11:25 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de myuu - 27-01-2009, 12:01 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 27-02-2009, 06:22 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaku-chin - 27-02-2009, 09:21 PM

RE: ??Boys' Love?? [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de dia_love_gackt - 12-04-2009, 09:08 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de chrissta - 25-05-2009, 02:27 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de KYM - 26-05-2009, 12:47 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Drama Queen - 26-05-2009, 10:38 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yaoi Queen - 14-06-2009, 05:58 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de I hate maths. - 14-06-2009, 06:34 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de nolazy - 14-06-2009, 06:43 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Yulyutza_I - 14-06-2009, 10:05 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de myuu - 15-06-2009, 01:22 AM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Just Sugar - 16-06-2009, 10:08 PM

RE: ღღBoys' Loveღღ [ ***Yaoi***(+18)Warning *-boy x boy-* explicit content ] - de Dark~Melody - 17-06-2009, 09:19 PM

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