O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

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#46

20-02-2009, 10:55 PM

Da merita sa il continui.Sa stii ca nu am mai observat greseli poate doae una, dar nu mai conteaza.Dupa cum ti-am spus imi place. dar mai ai putin de lucru nu ar strica daca incerci sa iti imbunatatesti descrierea.In rest e bine prindialog exprimi destul de bine gandurile personajelor si actiunea nu este grabita ci interesanta.Sa stii ca nu as vrea sa renunti ci sa continui.Am citit si celalalt fic al tau si imi place foarte mult.Nu uita, sa nu renunti si sa pui cat mai repede nextul,

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Abisul umbrelor Chiar nimeni nu mai este interesat de ficul meu? Sa stiu daca sa-l mai continui sau nu.

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O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 12:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 02:46 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 17-01-2009, 04:34 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 09:39 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 01:44 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 18-01-2009, 02:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 11:02 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 11:37 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 02:23 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kiddy - 18-01-2009, 03:37 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 19-01-2009, 04:42 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 19-01-2009, 06:52 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 19-01-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 03:21 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 09:58 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 11:25 AM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 02:59 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 25-01-2009, 10:39 AM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 06-02-2009, 09:41 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 13-02-2009, 09:31 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 15-02-2009, 05:28 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 28-02-2009, 09:35 AM

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