O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura)

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#23

31-01-2009, 11:57 AM

Felicitari inca un capitol frumos si reusit.Te descurci faorte bine si ai si talent. Imi place faptul ca scrii in ce in ce mai bine.Am vazut ca alternezi bine naratiunea, dialogul, care nu este sec si descrierea buna.Am observat o mica gresala: amai-mi.Dar nu asta este poblema.In rest otul este bine.Sa stii ca ai reusit sa ma faci sa imi placa povestea ta.Numi citesc asa multe ficuri cu sasusaku, desi este cuplul meu preferat.Am citit cam tot ce este despre ei, dar pe majoritatea le-am abandonat pentru ca ideile se repaetau sau deja deveneau plictistoare.Ficl tau in schimb nu este asa. Am citit toate capitolele.Imi place ideea cu melodiile capitolului.Nu pot decat sa te felicit si sa itiu urez succes in continuare.Sper sa pui continuarea cat mai repede.

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Abisul umbrelor Chiar nimeni nu mai este interesat de ficul meu? Sa stiu daca sa-l mai continui sau nu.

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O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 12:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 02:46 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 17-01-2009, 04:34 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 17-01-2009, 09:39 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 01:44 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 18-01-2009, 02:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 11:02 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de starnight - 18-01-2009, 11:37 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 18-01-2009, 02:23 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kiddy - 18-01-2009, 03:37 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 19-01-2009, 04:42 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 19-01-2009, 06:52 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 19-01-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 03:21 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 23-01-2009, 09:58 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 11:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 24-01-2009, 02:32 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 02:59 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 24-01-2009, 06:25 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 25-01-2009, 10:39 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Kinder - 25-01-2009, 01:04 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 31-01-2009, 09:25 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 31-01-2009, 11:57 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 31-01-2009, 09:12 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 02-02-2009, 07:39 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 03-02-2009, 02:56 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de O@n@ - 06-02-2009, 09:41 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 07-02-2009, 02:53 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Shilpa - 07-02-2009, 08:23 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 08-02-2009, 04:41 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 13-02-2009, 09:31 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 15-02-2009, 05:28 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 20-02-2009, 10:43 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Alexi - 21-02-2009, 10:00 PM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 22-02-2009, 08:52 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Annya - 28-02-2009, 09:35 AM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de BlueGum - 28-02-2009, 10:09 AM

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RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Sasuke-love-forever-sakura - 07-03-2009, 03:12 PM

RE: O viata de adolescent(a story about sasuke and sakura) - de Who said i have to be normal - 09-03-2009, 10:06 AM

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