Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi)

Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi)

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#67

01-07-2011, 10:26 PM

Buna! Asta este prima oara cand iti comentez. Imi place ficul tau. Observ ca primele capitole sunt mai scurte ca penultimul si ultimul, dar asta nu cred ca era important. Noul personaj, Alexo mi se pare un tip dragut. Abia astept sa-i vad si comportamentul. Si mai am ceva sa-ti spun. In scena aceea cand au facut dragoste, dupa parerea mea puteai sa descrii mai mult scena, nu ca sunt mai buna decat tine, dar asta imi spun si mie alti. Daca ultima parte te-a suparat spune-mi si il voi corecta.

[Imagine: Anime-Girl-8-Anime-Wallpapers-1366x768-300x168.jpg]

Trei lilieci stau pe balcon. Zboara unul si dupa un timp se intoarse plin de sange la gura. Le spuse celorlalti doi:
-Ati vazut turma aia se oi?
-Da!
-Nu mai este!
Zboara si al doilea si se intoarce la fel, cu sange la gura.
-Ati vazut turma aia vaci?
-Da!
-Nu mai este!
Zboara si al treilea si se intoarcec la fel ca fratii lui, zicand:
-Vedeti turnl ala de biserica?
-Da!
-Eu nu l-am vazut!

[Imagine: chibi_5878.gif]

, Kaoru

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Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 29-05-2011, 10:42 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest) - de Rain - 29-05-2011, 10:52 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de .Dudiii - 29-05-2011, 11:39 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 30-05-2011, 04:47 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 30-05-2011, 08:19 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 30-05-2011, 10:06 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 30-05-2011, 10:29 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 31-05-2011, 07:11 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 31-05-2011, 09:33 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de .Dudiii - 31-05-2011, 09:49 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 31-05-2011, 09:16 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 31-05-2011, 09:45 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de .Dudiii - 31-05-2011, 10:11 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 01-06-2011, 10:13 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 01-06-2011, 10:33 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Addeh - 01-06-2011, 03:12 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de alexutzy97 - 01-06-2011, 04:32 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 01-06-2011, 08:41 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 01-06-2011, 08:56 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 01-06-2011, 08:57 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 02-06-2011, 08:37 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de .Dudiii - 02-06-2011, 09:09 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de X-EnergY - 02-06-2011, 06:00 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 02-06-2011, 06:06 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 02-06-2011, 07:38 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 02-06-2011, 07:44 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de .Dudiii - 02-06-2011, 08:07 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 02-06-2011, 08:25 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 02-06-2011, 08:53 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 02-06-2011, 08:54 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de HanniGram - 03-06-2011, 08:45 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 03-06-2011, 06:06 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 03-06-2011, 06:16 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de .Dudiii - 03-06-2011, 06:22 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 03-06-2011, 07:40 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 03-06-2011, 10:47 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 04-06-2011, 11:00 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de .Dudiii - 04-06-2011, 11:15 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Addeh - 04-06-2011, 11:27 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 04-06-2011, 11:29 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 04-06-2011, 11:30 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 05-06-2011, 12:05 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 05-06-2011, 04:43 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 06-06-2011, 09:08 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 06-06-2011, 09:17 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 06-06-2011, 09:22 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de HanniGram - 07-06-2011, 08:18 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Addeh - 07-06-2011, 10:08 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 07-06-2011, 12:20 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 07-06-2011, 11:00 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 07-06-2011, 11:13 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 08-06-2011, 12:12 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Flash - 08-06-2011, 09:09 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 08-06-2011, 10:42 AM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de anime_addicted - 11-06-2011, 12:30 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 12-06-2011, 04:19 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kd.sens - 12-06-2011, 04:50 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 12-06-2011, 06:46 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 12-06-2011, 11:08 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 14-06-2011, 10:10 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de hiimera - 15-06-2011, 03:43 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Addeh - 16-06-2011, 08:31 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de ^.^Vampix^.^ - 30-06-2011, 08:16 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Rain - 30-06-2011, 08:31 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de hiimera - 30-06-2011, 10:40 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Aiwendil - 01-07-2011, 03:37 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Hasamy lost vampire - 01-07-2011, 10:26 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de Kimera - 08-07-2011, 03:47 PM

RE: Brother Love (+18 incest yaoi) - de LoLix - 19-07-2011, 01:48 PM

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