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Life among the Yakuza

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E chiar interesant ficul tau, am observat cateva greseli dar sunt minore deci nu o sa le iau in considerare bafta la scris si tine-o tot asa;)
A fost odata ca-n povesti
A fost ca niciodata
Pe la newsgroupuri romanesti
Poate o draga fata.

Iara de trista ce era
Caci nu avea pereche
Un kil de tuica-si cumpara
Pe zi ca sa se-mbete.

Si imbatindu-se vedea
Cum St. Basil apare
Cu calul sau alb ca de nea
Cu ochelari de soare



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 16-04-2011, 12:51 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Miranda. - 16-04-2011, 10:04 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 17-04-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Rose ^^ - 18-04-2011, 09:48 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Bonnie - 18-04-2011, 10:31 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Miranda. - 19-04-2011, 05:54 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 19-04-2011, 10:59 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Miranda. - 20-04-2011, 12:30 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 22-04-2011, 12:22 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 22-04-2011, 06:11 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Miranda. - 23-04-2011, 11:29 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Nywa - 24-04-2011, 11:45 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 26-04-2011, 08:45 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Miranda. - 26-04-2011, 09:46 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 29-04-2011, 10:11 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Zummy - 30-04-2011, 01:32 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 30-04-2011, 02:07 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Rose ^^ - 01-05-2011, 09:55 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 05-05-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Rose ^^ - 05-05-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 07-05-2011, 06:56 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de hiimera - 07-05-2011, 09:57 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 07-05-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 08-05-2011, 08:54 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de hiimera - 08-05-2011, 12:39 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 09-05-2011, 10:39 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 10-05-2011, 07:03 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de hiimera - 10-05-2011, 04:53 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Fifilina - 11-05-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 14-05-2011, 11:51 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 14-05-2011, 12:29 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de hiimera - 14-05-2011, 03:43 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Rose ^^ - 15-05-2011, 04:07 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Bbbiiiaaa - 16-05-2011, 04:05 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 17-05-2011, 09:51 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de ~~~KiOko kimy~~~ - 17-05-2011, 10:00 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Rose ^^ - 17-05-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 22-05-2011, 09:38 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 22-05-2011, 09:45 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Maria - 22-05-2011, 10:21 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Miranda. - 23-05-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Sho-Yo - 01-06-2011, 08:50 AM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Rose ^^ - 01-06-2011, 01:07 PM
RE: Life among the Yakuza - de Miranda. - 24-07-2011, 08:34 PM

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