02-02-2011, 02:37 PM
o//o :chuu: Wow, capitolul a fost fantastic, sincer ai niste idei foarte bune.Da-mi voie sa iti spun ca esti cea mai buna la descris sentimente.
Cel mai mult mi-a placut cum ai descris cand a aflat ca a murit Ryo, acel sentiment care i-a sfasiat inima si durerea care a insotit sentimentul...
Descrierea ai fact-o atat de complexa incat iti da senzatia ca vezi un film, ca intelegi totul cu lux de amanunte si ca faci parte din povestea lor.
Abea astept next-ul, abea astept sa vad ce se va intampla in continuare.
Bafta la scris!:love:
P.S. Anuntama te rog cand vine next-ul.
Cel mai mult mi-a placut cum ai descris cand a aflat ca a murit Ryo, acel sentiment care i-a sfasiat inima si durerea care a insotit sentimentul...
Descrierea ai fact-o atat de complexa incat iti da senzatia ca vezi un film, ca intelegi totul cu lux de amanunte si ca faci parte din povestea lor.
Abea astept next-ul, abea astept sa vad ce se va intampla in continuare.
Bafta la scris!:love:
P.S. Anuntama te rog cand vine next-ul.
"I'm crying inside and nobody know it but me."
„Comparisons are easily done
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
"
"Another head hangs lowly, Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "