15-12-2010, 10:13 AM
Mi-a placut acest capitol ! :]
Chiar simpatic, sincer . Iar acum ma tii in suspans cu cine naiba intra pe usa aia ? Tsunade ? Sasuke ? Hinata ? Eh, multe intrebari, doar un singur raspuns ;)
Ai avut descriere, si destul dialog . A fost cam sec, dar totusi a fost bine pus la punct *smile* . Cu naratiunea te descurci foarte bine, n-am ce comenta ! *innocent smile* .
Eh, astept nextu` cu nerabdare .
Cee Ya !
Chiar simpatic, sincer . Iar acum ma tii in suspans cu cine naiba intra pe usa aia ? Tsunade ? Sasuke ? Hinata ? Eh, multe intrebari, doar un singur raspuns ;)
Ai avut descriere, si destul dialog . A fost cam sec, dar totusi a fost bine pus la punct *smile* . Cu naratiunea te descurci foarte bine, n-am ce comenta ! *innocent smile* .
Eh, astept nextu` cu nerabdare .
Cee Ya !
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Enough for me ...
The past is history.
The future is a mystery.
And the time we have now is a gift, that's why we call it "the present."
The future is a mystery.
And the time we have now is a gift, that's why we call it "the present."
He`s cute <3 !
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