11-12-2010, 06:21 PM
mersi de commuri!!! (desi imi pare rau ca voi doua sunteti singurele care-mi cititi ficul...) omg Mira-chan asta da comm mare...stii bine ca nu ma deranjeaza criticile constructive ;) o sa ma interesez (cu alte cuvinte o sa-l intreb pe prietenul meu din Tennessee) si o sa aflu cum as putea sa ma exprim mai bine la faza aia. ma bucur ca v-am uimit! in posturile de pe celalalt site capitolul VII se cheama "Vampire" si de asta am schimbat numele, sa va uimesc mai tare...pe ceilalti (de pe celalalt site I mean) nu mai puteam sa-i uimesc ca topicul se chema deja "Wild Soul-A story about horses and vampires". si eu am facut ficul asta din doua lucruri care-mi plac mult: vampiri si cai ;). cat despre chestia cu AlicexJosh...voi mentine suspansul. Acum, Michiyo-chan, nu, Liz nu e vampir. e om si am de gand sa o las asa. vei vedea in capitolul asta mai multe detalii despre motivul pentru care are ea punctele alea pe gat...BTW next-ul revine la Alice...
[center]â¤X.Another group[/center]
My black Mercedes was at the end of the street. Liz remained open-mouthed when she saw the car.
"Is this...Is this your car?" she asked.
"Yep. Come on in." I answered, getting on the driver's seat.
She got on the left seat.
"Where's your home?"
"West Derby."
"Wow, that's far away from here!" I said, starting the car. "Who brought you here?"
"Um...My boyfriend."
I was sure that her boyfriend had something to do with the red marks.
"What's with the signs on your neck?" I asked.
"I...umm...scratched."
"Hmph. There's only one thing that ca do a mark like that, and it is not a simple 'scratch'"
"You mean you know...?"
"Yep. So who did that to you?"
"My boyfriend."
"I guessed that, I mean what's his name."
"Eric."
"Do you know others like him?"
"Yeah, they're an entire gang: Liam, Eric, Noah, Ken, Daisy, Sarah and Milly."
Wow...A big group.
"Are they students at your school?"
"Yes. But how do you know about the vampires?"
"Are they vampires we're talking about!?"
" ???"
"Just kidding."
"So how did you found out? Are you...?"
"Yes. I am one of them."
[center]â¤X.Another group[/center]
My black Mercedes was at the end of the street. Liz remained open-mouthed when she saw the car.
"Is this...Is this your car?" she asked.
"Yep. Come on in." I answered, getting on the driver's seat.
She got on the left seat.
"Where's your home?"
"West Derby."
"Wow, that's far away from here!" I said, starting the car. "Who brought you here?"
"Um...My boyfriend."
I was sure that her boyfriend had something to do with the red marks.
"What's with the signs on your neck?" I asked.
"I...umm...scratched."
"Hmph. There's only one thing that ca do a mark like that, and it is not a simple 'scratch'"
"You mean you know...?"
"Yep. So who did that to you?"
"My boyfriend."
"I guessed that, I mean what's his name."
"Eric."
"Do you know others like him?"
"Yeah, they're an entire gang: Liam, Eric, Noah, Ken, Daisy, Sarah and Milly."
Wow...A big group.
"Are they students at your school?"
"Yes. But how do you know about the vampires?"
"Are they vampires we're talking about!?"
" ???"
"Just kidding."
"So how did you found out? Are you...?"
"Yes. I am one of them."