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We will still be friends forever despite difficulties

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Well, ea e furnizorul?
Poate ai vrut sa nu iasa bocela dar sincera sa fiu cred ca nu ai reusit.
Am vazut cateva greseli de tastare si gramaticale. Iarasi cateva semne de punctuatie o iau razna in capitolul asta, te-ai grabit cand l-ai scris? Oricum, cu toate astea a iesit destul de frumos.
Ai descris camera lui Deidara daca imi dau eu bine seama si in afara casei. Blondul locuieste cu mama lui?
Nu am vazut nici o linie de dialog deci nu am ce sa spun la asta. Si totusi sunt curioasa sa vad daca am dreptate.
Well, cam atat am avut de spus. Cand pui urmatorul capitol let me know, OK? Buh Bye !!!
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 31-12-2010, 01:54 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 02-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 04-01-2011, 04:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 09-01-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 13-01-2011, 10:05 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 14-01-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 22-01-2011, 09:37 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 23-01-2011, 07:56 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de DeDal N. - 27-01-2011, 04:08 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 29-01-2011, 07:09 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 30-01-2011, 08:32 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 05-02-2011, 11:14 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 06-02-2011, 11:42 AM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 11-02-2011, 11:16 PM
RE: We will still be friends forever despite difficulties - de *ILY Yaoi Maniac* - 20-02-2011, 10:54 PM

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