[Terminat] Love Song [shonen-ai / yaoi]

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[Terminat] Love Song [shonen-ai / yaoi]

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#25

04-08-2008, 09:27 PM

My fic!!! Cum de nu am comentat?

E a doua oara cand il citesc, dar nu ma satur! Imi place cum scrii, stiu ca-i mai vechi, dar eu tot mai critic cate ceva:

1.Ai grija la exprimare, in ceva locuri scartaie.
2. Descrie un pic mai mult in "ahem" "faze"
3.Ai niste greseli de tastare, da ma rog...nu mai conteaza!

Pune repede nextul! Papa!

The old bastard left his ties and his suit
A brown box, mothballs and bowling shoes

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[Terminat] Love Song [shonen-ai / yaoi] - de Yaoi Queen - 23-07-2008, 06:21 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Sol - 23-07-2008, 06:32 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 23-07-2008, 06:36 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 24-07-2008, 12:30 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 26-07-2008, 10:47 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 26-07-2008, 11:04 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 26-07-2008, 03:08 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 28-07-2008, 11:16 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 28-07-2008, 11:27 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 28-07-2008, 11:38 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 29-07-2008, 12:46 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 29-07-2008, 01:33 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 29-07-2008, 01:33 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 30-07-2008, 01:00 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 30-07-2008, 01:13 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 30-07-2008, 01:46 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 01-08-2008, 11:17 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 01-08-2008, 11:31 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 01-08-2008, 11:33 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 02-08-2008, 11:39 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 03-08-2008, 12:41 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 04-08-2008, 08:38 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 04-08-2008, 09:12 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 04-08-2008, 09:24 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de bastard_in_love - 04-08-2008, 09:27 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 04-08-2008, 09:43 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 05-08-2008, 11:37 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 05-08-2008, 02:17 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 06-08-2008, 11:46 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 07-08-2008, 12:59 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 07-08-2008, 11:55 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 09-08-2008, 09:11 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 10-08-2008, 11:52 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 13-08-2008, 03:53 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 13-08-2008, 04:21 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 14-08-2008, 10:47 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 20-08-2008, 02:59 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 20-08-2008, 09:45 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Mitsukai Yoru - 21-08-2008, 03:52 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 23-08-2008, 01:25 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 23-08-2008, 11:17 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 23-08-2008, 03:51 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 24-08-2008, 10:27 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 24-08-2008, 10:59 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 24-08-2008, 01:32 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Mitsukai Yoru - 24-08-2008, 02:40 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 28-08-2008, 11:07 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 29-08-2008, 12:44 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Mitsukai Yoru - 29-08-2008, 02:34 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 29-08-2008, 12:54 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 29-08-2008, 02:34 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Cryzy - 29-08-2008, 03:14 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 31-08-2008, 01:10 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 01-09-2008, 02:25 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 01-09-2008, 10:48 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Cryzy - 02-09-2008, 12:06 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 07-09-2008, 03:12 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Mitsukai Yoru - 09-09-2008, 05:49 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 11-09-2008, 12:08 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 11-09-2008, 11:16 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 11-09-2008, 03:49 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de October - 14-09-2008, 06:31 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Utlaning - 17-09-2008, 10:11 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 20-09-2008, 02:37 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 20-09-2008, 10:56 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Ice_angel_234 - 21-09-2008, 11:52 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de October - 21-09-2008, 01:30 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 22-09-2008, 08:42 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Flash - 25-09-2008, 10:46 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de October - 28-09-2008, 09:21 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 30-09-2008, 03:33 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 06-10-2008, 09:18 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Flash - 08-10-2008, 10:33 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Cryzy - 09-10-2008, 09:01 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 18-10-2008, 08:46 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 01-11-2008, 06:29 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 03-11-2008, 09:43 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Cryzy - 11-11-2008, 12:49 AM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 11-11-2008, 06:11 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 11-11-2008, 06:52 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de myuu - 19-11-2008, 10:06 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Yaoi Queen - 22-11-2008, 07:00 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Alysu - 22-11-2008, 11:30 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de dia_love_gackt - 09-12-2008, 09:12 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de myuu - 11-12-2008, 08:21 PM

RE: ~Love Song~ [shonen-ai/Yaoi] ~ my old old old fic - de Aiumy - 19-04-2009, 07:36 PM

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