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Mafia love. Crime love... [18+]

#18
Un capitol foarte frumos. Descriere ai avut, sentimentele puteau sa mai fie conturate, dar devenea plictisitor dupa aceea. Dialogul nu este sec, putin de tot la inceput, dar atat. Ideea este foarte frumoasa, si lupta nu trebuia s-o faci atat de grabita. Actiunea este grabita putin in momentul in care au fost atacati, puteai sa pui mai multa descriere.

Ja ne



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Icsdeee. - 25-01-2011, 11:43 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Prevented :D - 28-01-2011, 10:18 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 29-01-2011, 04:51 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 03-02-2011, 06:37 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Icsdeee. - 03-02-2011, 06:48 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 13-02-2011, 09:27 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Hakusor. - 14-02-2011, 06:12 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 05-03-2011, 11:44 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Rose ^^ - 08-05-2011, 08:31 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Rose ^^ - 28-06-2011, 09:42 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 28-06-2011, 10:58 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Prevented :D - 30-06-2011, 11:25 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Rose ^^ - 05-07-2011, 07:00 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 06-07-2011, 06:06 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 14-07-2011, 03:31 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 15-07-2011, 11:38 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Rose ^^ - 18-07-2011, 09:32 AM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Rose ^^ - 18-07-2011, 09:20 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 18-07-2011, 11:15 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Rose ^^ - 19-07-2011, 09:20 AM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... - de Miranda. - 19-07-2011, 05:46 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Rose ^^ - 06-08-2011, 02:15 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Miranda. - 06-08-2011, 03:28 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Rose ^^ - 06-08-2011, 07:18 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [+16] - de Miranda. - 06-08-2011, 07:31 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 06:12 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 10:01 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Rose ^^ - 11-08-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Miranda. - 12-08-2011, 07:38 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Rose ^^ - 12-08-2011, 09:30 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Rose ^^ - 14-08-2011, 02:44 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Miranda. - 15-08-2011, 12:56 AM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Miranda. - 15-08-2011, 02:45 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Rose ^^ - 15-08-2011, 03:18 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Miranda. - 17-08-2011, 11:00 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [15+] - de Rose ^^ - 18-08-2011, 04:06 PM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [18+] - de Rose ^^ - 23-08-2011, 10:04 AM
RE: Mafia love. Crime love... [18+] - de Rose ^^ - 07-09-2011, 10:51 PM

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