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Just some one-shots

#8
Dracusorul meu mic si scump ^_^ In sfarsit ai postat capitolul doi, un capitol extraordinar de frumos xD. Mi-a placut foarte mult! Si acel Alex e un... un... un... idiot! Un badaran, un nesimtit cum nu se mai poate! Daca il prind jur ca il omor. Well gata m-am calmat. Descrierea mi-a placut foarte mult, nu am ce comenta la ea. Nici la naratiune nu am ptr k a fost ft frumoasa. Actiunea nu este grabita, iar dialogul nu e sec. Ai avut doua greseli de tastare dar nu sunt grave. ,,Bruneta fuge cat poate de repede spre casa, insa in drum spre casa se opreste in parc si se asaza pe o banca si da frau liber lacrimilor incepand sa se gandeasca...". repede spre casa, insa in drum spre casa... repetite. In fine. Atat am avut de spus si astept continuarea buh bye! ^^
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Just some one-shots - de Mariah . - 24-01-2011, 12:31 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Vero - 24-01-2011, 01:29 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de AlerimxD - 24-01-2011, 10:47 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Moon princess - 24-01-2011, 10:58 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Mariah . - 25-01-2011, 12:59 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Vero - 25-01-2011, 01:14 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Daria - 25-01-2011, 11:32 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de DeDal N. - 25-01-2011, 05:04 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Mariah . - 27-01-2011, 01:05 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Vero - 27-01-2011, 01:30 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de MooN. - 27-01-2011, 10:38 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Icsdeee. - 27-01-2011, 02:36 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Moony691 - 27-01-2011, 04:03 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de DeDal N. - 27-01-2011, 04:14 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Moon princess - 28-01-2011, 01:10 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de BloodyInnocence - 28-01-2011, 05:51 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Daria - 03-02-2011, 11:18 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Mariah . - 04-02-2011, 12:27 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Daria - 04-02-2011, 12:32 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Addeh - 04-02-2011, 10:30 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Mariah . - 04-02-2011, 01:23 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Dufresne - 04-02-2011, 06:40 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de DeDal N. - 04-02-2011, 06:42 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Vero - 05-02-2011, 01:21 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de **angels** - 08-02-2011, 05:23 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Hachiko - 11-02-2011, 07:20 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Mariah . - 12-02-2011, 12:45 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Moon princess - 12-02-2011, 01:33 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Katniss - 12-02-2011, 10:59 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de SnowFlake. - 12-02-2011, 11:41 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de DeDal N. - 12-02-2011, 01:38 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Vero - 13-02-2011, 12:53 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Kayla. - 14-02-2011, 11:58 AM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Beatrix LaVey - 14-02-2011, 12:10 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Addeh - 14-02-2011, 06:17 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Mariah . - 05-03-2011, 10:58 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Addeh - 05-03-2011, 11:09 PM
RE: Just some one-shotes... - de Vero - 21-03-2011, 01:36 AM


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