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In love with a vampire

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#51
26-05-2009, 09:24 PM (Ultima modificare: 27-05-2009, 09:28 AM {2} de Mitzuke..)
... nu nu nu nu..aja ceva nu se poate intampla :...:
doamne sa ii sparga capul lu' ala cnva...
marcus esti mort ma?...nu se poate...daca moare strici farmecul ficului...trebuie sa aiba happy ending.. :pls:
descrierea ta a fost superba....ai descris sentimentele foarte bn si amanuntit...la fel si desfasurarea atiunii
cand ai zis ca va fi neprevizibil ficul nu m-am gandit ca va fi chiar aja
dialogul nu e sec...
Ai pus totusi putin cam mult...cea mai mare parte e dialog..
dar tot imi place:))
atentie sporita la punctuatie foarte multi fac aceste gresli de punctuatie(nu le mai zic)
greseli de tastare nu ai...nu am ce sa iti zic decat:
mii de felicitari pt ficul tau...esti foarte talentata... continua tot aja...
PS: nu uita Happy ending(asta nu inseamna sa ii omori pe amandoi(delia si marcus) )

Mitzuke edit:Holy cow,mai pui multe emoticoane?
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 13-12-2008, 02:13 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Kali?! - 13-12-2008, 03:36 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de pffboy - 13-12-2008, 06:39 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Apathy - 13-12-2008, 06:56 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 14-12-2008, 04:30 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Kali?! - 14-12-2008, 10:17 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Sadic_Soul - 14-12-2008, 10:19 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 16-12-2008, 04:04 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Kali?! - 16-12-2008, 07:22 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Sadic_Soul - 17-12-2008, 09:34 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Apathy - 17-12-2008, 11:10 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 22-12-2008, 05:43 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Kali?! - 23-12-2008, 08:06 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Sadic_Soul - 24-12-2008, 11:34 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de iuliana - 25-12-2008, 09:19 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 06-01-2009, 06:10 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de ~angelino~ - 06-01-2009, 11:54 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de nolazy - 08-01-2009, 01:22 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Apathy - 09-01-2009, 01:29 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de ~angelino~ - 10-01-2009, 01:23 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Sadic_Soul - 12-01-2009, 09:29 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 15-01-2009, 04:53 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 02-02-2009, 10:08 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Sadic_Soul - 03-02-2009, 10:43 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 25-02-2009, 10:54 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 17-03-2009, 11:14 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de ...::YumI-CHaN::... - 19-03-2009, 10:08 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de ~angelino~ - 21-03-2009, 11:21 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Akya_haru - 18-04-2009, 12:27 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 24-04-2009, 09:36 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 04-05-2009, 04:55 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 13-05-2009, 09:31 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de pffboy - 14-05-2009, 01:54 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Elina - 14-05-2009, 07:20 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 18-05-2009, 03:46 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Elina - 18-05-2009, 07:52 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Khonsu - 18-05-2009, 08:02 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de ~Anna~ - 18-05-2009, 08:25 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 22-05-2009, 10:04 AM
RE: In love with a vampire (drama) - de RaYnutza - 22-05-2009, 09:11 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 23-05-2009, 09:55 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 23-05-2009, 10:17 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Elina - 24-05-2009, 08:55 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 24-05-2009, 10:44 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de ~~YuRa~~ - 24-05-2009, 11:34 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de ~Anna~ - 24-05-2009, 03:51 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de pffboy - 24-05-2009, 04:26 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 24-05-2009, 06:50 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Elina - 24-05-2009, 07:08 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 26-05-2009, 07:21 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Elina - 26-05-2009, 09:24 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de L'pti.chat - 26-05-2009, 09:48 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de RaYnutza - 27-05-2009, 10:56 AM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Elina - 27-05-2009, 01:38 PM
RE: In love with a vampire - de Tox - 11-06-2009, 12:18 PM

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