01-03-2011, 05:28 PM
Ce frumos a fost capitolul!
Nu imi vine sa cred ca sa terminat asa de repede.Vai cel putin cei doi sunt impreuna si se iubesc.
Imi place mult capitolul si sfarsitu. Ideea cu plaja este foarte clasica si romantica.
Descrierea, naratiune si dialogul sunt foarte, chiar foarte :X bune.
Scuze ca am lasat un comentariu asa de scurt.
Acum l-am editat, sper ca acum e ok.
Sa ma anunti daca mai faci un fic. :*
Nu imi vine sa cred ca sa terminat asa de repede.Vai cel putin cei doi sunt impreuna si se iubesc.
Imi place mult capitolul si sfarsitu. Ideea cu plaja este foarte clasica si romantica.
Descrierea, naratiune si dialogul sunt foarte, chiar foarte :X bune.
Scuze ca am lasat un comentariu asa de scurt.
Acum l-am editat, sper ca acum e ok.
Sa ma anunti daca mai faci un fic. :*
"I'm crying inside and nobody know it but me."
„Comparisons are easily done
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "
Once you've had a taste of perfection
Like an apple hanging from a tree
I picked the ripest one, I still got the seed…“
"
"Another head hangs lowly, Child is slowly taken.
And the violence caused such silence,
Who are we mistaken?
But you see, it's not me, it's not my family.
In your head, in your head they are fighting,
With their tanks and their bombs,
And their bombs and their guns.
In your head, in your head, they are crying... "