28-01-2010, 03:51 PM
Hello!;;)
din nou pe ici... well capitolul a avut de toate, modurile de expunere s-au imbinat armonios, iar actiunea a fost captivanta; desi as fii vrut o descriere ceva mai detaliata in ceea ce privesc sentimentele, mai ales atunci cand Crystal l-a vazut pe Jack la ea acasa, ma rog... :]; fi mai atenta la greselile de tastare, uof uof neatentia si graba asta ;)):
Alinata - alianta
mi-a spus pe un to calm - ton
rezmat - rezemat
uracu - urcau
deisgur - desigur
am ptut - putut
Am prcat - parcat
alianteti - aliantei
altceva... abia astept sa vad cum va decurge balul, cat despre Mark ala imi vine sa-i tai capu', bine l-a invatat minte Cryss' :-" *evil*..
nextu' nextu'!^^
kissuuu&byeee
din nou pe ici... well capitolul a avut de toate, modurile de expunere s-au imbinat armonios, iar actiunea a fost captivanta; desi as fii vrut o descriere ceva mai detaliata in ceea ce privesc sentimentele, mai ales atunci cand Crystal l-a vazut pe Jack la ea acasa, ma rog... :]; fi mai atenta la greselile de tastare, uof uof neatentia si graba asta ;)):
Alinata - alianta
mi-a spus pe un to calm - ton
rezmat - rezemat
uracu - urcau
deisgur - desigur
am ptut - putut
Am prcat - parcat
alianteti - aliantei
altceva... abia astept sa vad cum va decurge balul, cat despre Mark ala imi vine sa-i tai capu', bine l-a invatat minte Cryss' :-" *evil*..
nextu' nextu'!^^
kissuuu&byeee
My fic:
Predestined paths : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13338
[naruto]Teenagers : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13050 (finish
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Predestined paths : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13338
[naruto]Teenagers : http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=13050 (finish
)I wish to meet you again next time
Love is more selfish the deeper it gets
until you want to tie each breath down
unreasonable, yet...
We climb a spiral of light
the red memory is a poisonous tattoo
a tattoo that shows the future's chaos
if we're together, until we shatter
Love is more selfish the deeper it gets
until you want to tie each breath down
unreasonable, yet...
We climb a spiral of light
the red memory is a poisonous tattoo
a tattoo that shows the future's chaos
if we're together, until we shatter