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Money vs. Love +18

Erina Ozaki Deconectat
DENISSU is in the zone XD
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#29
29-11-2009, 07:11 PM
Deci sysu..
Descrierea se imbina armonios cu naratiunea,si dialogul nu e sec...e foarte bine..Ink cv ..noul capitol este foarte interesant,dar daca am citit eu bn ,Manuela va pieri in confruntarea din jungla?!!:cry:
In ultima parte cu perspectiva naratorului e foarte bine relatata,dar cum de am apuca sa citesc m-a dus cu gandu la chimie...
Sfarsitul este foarte trist :( :(...si app melodia pusa Moonlight Sonata este superba si se potriveste cu atmosfera..Abia ast nextu..Byez si pooop :chuu::love:
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 20-09-2009, 03:34 AM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 20-09-2009, 09:20 AM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 20-09-2009, 06:40 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de A'Svear - 20-09-2009, 09:19 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 21-09-2009, 10:29 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 22-09-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 23-09-2009, 06:26 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 25-09-2009, 08:25 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 27-09-2009, 11:00 AM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de D@n@ - 27-09-2009, 12:13 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 29-09-2009, 10:09 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de DeathRebel - 30-09-2009, 02:54 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Shadow. - 30-09-2009, 08:53 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 30-09-2009, 09:53 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 02-10-2009, 04:46 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 04-10-2009, 10:00 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de morfo - 04-10-2009, 10:21 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 09-10-2009, 09:05 PM
RE: [SasuSaku] Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 17-10-2009, 07:00 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 24-10-2009, 04:52 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 08-11-2009, 02:00 AM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de Whisper - 08-11-2009, 06:33 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de "~Setsuna~Noelle~" - 08-11-2009, 08:24 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 15-11-2009, 08:21 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de Angel~Of~Dark - 15-11-2009, 08:37 PM
RE: [naruto]Money vs. Love +18 - de Alexi - 15-11-2009, 08:42 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 29-11-2009, 12:25 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Erina Ozaki - 29-11-2009, 07:11 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Isa-chan - 04-12-2009, 03:12 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 16-12-2009, 07:03 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 29-12-2009, 03:33 PM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Miauu - 04-01-2010, 12:21 AM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de ellamanu - 23-01-2010, 12:59 AM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Miauu - 23-01-2010, 11:31 AM
RE: Money vs. Love +18 - de Bambilici - 23-01-2010, 12:56 PM

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