dg's Sh1@t

[Ookami46]

[BEWARE !!! Unexperienced critique XD ]

( you asked for this / sooo... )

1st - I like this one,the color combination at least,but that ray of light is kind of...to white O_o"
2nd - damn white light O.o Macar aici chiar ti-ai folosit obsesia cu c4ds in a cool way, gives the whole thing perspective,thus the c4d in the front is kind of smooth while the rest of the composition is preatty sharp
3rd - ok,what part should stand out in this stuffed thing? <.<
4th - parerea mea este ca mai bine cautai un stock 3d,mergea mai bine cu c4d-urile,cause they're like extensions of the stocks 2d lightning things
5th - ti-am mai zis,ai stricat farmecul cand i-ai retezat chelia xD and i don't find lowering the opacity of the stocks edges a brilliant choice :\ as the brushes are rough, they don't 'blend' that great
6th - Simple and colourfull <3 Nu stiu cum arata stokul la inceput but the light came out great here >.o
7th - Huge light @_@ si te-ai cam bagat cu textu in render <.<
8th - No comment either xD I don't quite get what it is, the sharpen parts makes the colors kind of burn - the eyes,that is. And from all the empthy space you had, you just had to squish the text there.
9th - DAATTTEEEEBBAAAAYYYOOOOOO -choke- ok,ok. I think this is the best one you blended the stock with the rest,it has movement,light,dar se imprastie in 3 directii diferite ... w.e
10th - This doesn't make much sense,does it? The render just doesn't seem right in there,si dungile galbene ramase nu sunt foarte folositare xD
11th - I dun really get what's in the right side up but it's nice as a full xD and you stuck the text to the corner again ;_;
12th - Yeeaaahhh,more lighting round the render <3 this time the white lines make sense xD
13th - Urgh... random comment cause I'm already lazy
14th - and here i can't find anything to bitch about -_-
15th - lightning spots are so random o_o and quite strange choice of sharp spot,to me it gives the render a fading effect a bit,dunno =_="

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