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Mirror of love

#57
Weeeell...uite'ma si pe mine pe aici....mda, nu prea te bucuri..asta e! =]]
Ah...trebuie sa spun ca pentru prima data in viata mea accept capitolele scurte :)) *wow...am citit aproximativ 10, record personal!*

N'am sa insir toate greselile desigur, mi'ar fi luat prea mult si as fi ocupat prea multe pagini.

Pe total, ficul tau mi'a starnit interesul...naratiunea e buna, cu descrierea stai ok.
Am vazut de'a lungul celor 10 capitolele niste greseli gramaticale, de tastare si de exprimare....nu foarte grave..mai putin in cazul celor gramaticale, unde as vrea sa te pui la punct.

Ideea e bunicica..ce pot sa mai zic..succes in continuare!
Astept nextul!



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 04:29 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 04:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 18-04-2009, 06:21 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mischa - 18-04-2009, 07:59 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 18-04-2009, 08:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 09:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 09:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 10:44 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 19-04-2009, 10:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 11:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 19-04-2009, 08:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 09:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 10:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 10:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 11:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 20-04-2009, 09:30 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 11:46 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 12:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 12:23 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 02:25 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 20-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 07:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 20-04-2009, 08:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 09:13 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 10:54 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 04:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 21-04-2009, 04:50 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 21-04-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 05:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 21-04-2009, 05:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 06:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 07:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 07:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 21-04-2009, 08:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 08:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 10:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 11:14 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 08:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 22-04-2009, 08:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 03:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 22-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 22-04-2009, 05:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 05:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 22-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 22-04-2009, 06:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 07:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 24-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 24-04-2009, 07:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 24-04-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 25-04-2009, 03:43 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 26-04-2009, 04:22 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 26-04-2009, 04:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 27-04-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 27-04-2009, 07:38 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 28-04-2009, 06:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 28-04-2009, 06:26 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 29-04-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 29-04-2009, 08:33 PM


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