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Mirror of love

#23
Greseli:
Te rog sa nu mai pui atatea puncte de suspensie :-s...arata ezitarea, iar tu ai cam multe aici.
"Dar el ma prinse de incheietura,intorcandu-ma cu fata la el." - ehm :-s dupa virgula adauga un space ;;)

"Mai bine m-as duce sa-mi fac unghiile. M-am ridicat lenesa si m-am dus catre baie,cu gandul sa fac o baie." - si unghiile unde?:D

M-am ridicat lenesa si m-am dus catre baie,cu gandul sa fac o baie. Am dat drumul la apa calda,apoi am pus sare de baie si spuma de baie. -repetitie :| [si eu fac >.<]

cercane- cearcane
"Stateam pe covor,cand mi-am dat seama de ce m-am impiedicat,de covor." -repetitie cu [,] cuvantul covor
zambiind - zambind
vroia- voia
"Mai ti minte propunerea de ieri?"- Mai tii minte propunerea de ieri?
"maine, dupa petrecere" - din moment ce petrecerea era azi, am inteles ca la ora 7 PM ...ar veni dupa 12 noaptea sau cum?:-?
"iesiind afara" -iesind afara ... puteai spune iesind din camera ... nuj, nu-mi place cum suna iesind afara, parca e pleonasm, poti iesi si inauntru?
"ai vorbii" -ai vorbi

greselile sunt tipice oricui, si eu fac mule :-j si sunt multe persoane care ma corecteaza mereu :|, insa nu te descuraja :x si incearca sa te perfectionezi [de'am putea face asta, suntem la un anumit rang si numai prin munca putem, dar stii, nu toate ficurile trebe sa placa oricui, asa cum unora, anumite carti nu le plac, in timp ce cuiva ii plac] :x
vreau continuarea si da, stiu ca te'am batut muuuult la cap =)) [srry :">]
:x:x cat mai repede ;;) astept :x:x Ja ne! :x:x



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 03:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 04:29 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 04:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 18-04-2009, 06:21 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mischa - 18-04-2009, 07:59 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 18-04-2009, 08:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 09:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 18-04-2009, 09:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 18-04-2009, 10:44 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 18-04-2009, 10:56 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 19-04-2009, 10:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 11:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 19-04-2009, 08:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 09:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 10:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 19-04-2009, 10:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 19-04-2009, 11:15 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 20-04-2009, 09:30 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 11:46 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 12:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 12:23 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 20-04-2009, 02:25 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 02:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 20-04-2009, 07:42 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de |~ReFLuXy~| - 20-04-2009, 07:47 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 20-04-2009, 08:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 20-04-2009, 09:13 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 10:54 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 04:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 21-04-2009, 04:50 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 21-04-2009, 05:00 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 05:05 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Alexi - 21-04-2009, 05:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 06:10 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 21-04-2009, 07:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 07:51 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 21-04-2009, 08:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 08:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:30 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 21-04-2009, 10:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 21-04-2009, 10:45 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 21-04-2009, 11:14 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 08:37 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Monica Wksv - 22-04-2009, 08:53 AM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 03:28 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 22-04-2009, 03:36 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 22-04-2009, 05:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 22-04-2009, 05:40 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Bubbles - 22-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 22-04-2009, 06:32 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 22-04-2009, 07:06 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 24-04-2009, 06:11 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Just Sugar - 24-04-2009, 07:18 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 24-04-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 25-04-2009, 03:43 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 26-04-2009, 04:22 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Mabel - 26-04-2009, 04:35 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Nya. - 27-04-2009, 02:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 27-04-2009, 07:38 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Rikku - 28-04-2009, 06:12 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Crynu. xD - 28-04-2009, 06:26 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 29-04-2009, 07:41 PM
RE: Mirror of love - de nemo-chii - 29-04-2009, 08:33 PM


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