15-12-2007, 11:44 PM
Bine pustoaic-o!Mult mai bine.Mai ai unele greseli de exprimare...de tastare,dar totul se rezolva.cum ti-am spus si pe mess....evita expresia "s-a sculat".Foloseste "s-a ridicat".Mai avem de lucrat la un lucru foarte important...repeti anumite cuvinte de prea multe ori.Oricum...sunt multumita de ce a iesit aici.Astept continuarea!Ja ne si pupici!
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My sin is Pride.
I'm on my highway to Hell!
Yuki is my kamy-sama. So...Shut the f*** up!
Criticii nu-i pot ranii pe creatori decta cu permisiunea acestora.
You tried to hold me under, I held my breath
Alone and now you wonder, what I possess
Nothing you can say , nothing's gonna change what you've done to me
Now it's time to shine, I'm gonna take what's mine
While you're burning inside my light
Alone and now you wonder, what I possess
Nothing you can say , nothing's gonna change what you've done to me
Now it's time to shine, I'm gonna take what's mine
While you're burning inside my light