The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples)

The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples)

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01-01-2009, 04:42 PM (Ultima modificare: 01-01-2009, 04:43 PM {2} de bastard_in_love.)

Wow... decizia este... cel putin socanta. Nu m-as fi asteptat la asta... nici nu stiu daca e bine sau nu. Parerea mea este ca nu ai cum sa evoluezi pur si simplu apucandu-te sa infuleci carti:)) de ce nu continui sa scrii cata vreme acumulezi informatie? Adica... eu zic ca ar fi un bun exercitiu.
Totusi observ ca tu chiar iti doresti sa evoluezi! Chiar te felicit pentru asta, pentru ca admiti ca ai gresit si pentru ca intradevar te straduiesti!

In legatura cu ultimile capitole...
numai -> uneori era necesar sa scrii "nu mai...." adica sa folosesti "mai" ca adverb!
Ai grija la unele repetitii...
Si despre virgule si restul... mai bine nu te mai bat la cap, chestiile astea le prinzi cu timpul...
In fine, astept un nou capitol... cat mai curand posibil.

Ja:bye:

The old bastard left his ties and his suit
A brown box, mothballs and bowling shoes

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The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 21-12-2008, 11:54 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de nolazy - 22-12-2008, 12:49 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 22-12-2008, 01:56 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ArYaNnA - 22-12-2008, 02:20 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ThorthKa - 22-12-2008, 10:32 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 22-12-2008, 04:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Melyeter - 22-12-2008, 05:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 22-12-2008, 05:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 22-12-2008, 07:21 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de MisS.sAdiStic - 22-12-2008, 08:53 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de bastard_in_love - 23-12-2008, 09:47 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 23-12-2008, 10:59 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 24-12-2008, 02:57 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 24-12-2008, 11:05 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 25-12-2008, 02:01 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 25-12-2008, 03:22 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de bastard_in_love - 25-12-2008, 05:25 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 25-12-2008, 09:50 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de ArYaNnA - 26-12-2008, 11:48 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 26-12-2008, 07:02 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Sol - 26-12-2008, 08:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 26-12-2008, 11:36 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 28-12-2008, 04:44 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 28-12-2008, 05:42 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 28-12-2008, 07:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Lithium-Angel - 28-12-2008, 09:06 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 28-12-2008, 09:13 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Mitsukai Yoru - 28-12-2008, 10:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de adyna_45 - 28-12-2008, 10:52 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de Abiyah - 29-12-2008, 11:41 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de myuu - 29-12-2008, 12:13 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute. ( ghiciti cu ce:P) - de originalcopy - 29-12-2008, 12:23 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 29-12-2008, 07:10 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 30-12-2008, 02:31 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 29-12-2008, 07:37 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 29-12-2008, 07:55 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 29-12-2008, 10:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 30-12-2008, 04:34 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 30-12-2008, 04:46 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 30-12-2008, 05:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 30-12-2008, 09:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 30-12-2008, 11:16 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de bastard_in_love - 01-01-2009, 04:42 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 05-01-2009, 09:40 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 06-01-2009, 12:43 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 06-01-2009, 01:21 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 06-01-2009, 04:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 06-01-2009, 05:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 07-01-2009, 12:14 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 08-01-2009, 08:56 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Selena. - 09-01-2009, 03:48 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 11-01-2009, 09:14 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 11-01-2009, 09:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 12-01-2009, 01:05 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 12-01-2009, 01:14 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 12-01-2009, 06:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 12-01-2009, 11:10 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 17-01-2009, 10:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de YuuraBo - 17-01-2009, 11:27 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 17-01-2009, 11:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de nolazy - 18-01-2009, 01:18 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 18-01-2009, 01:52 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 19-01-2009, 04:50 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 26-01-2009, 05:20 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 28-01-2009, 04:47 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 28-01-2009, 07:05 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de myuu - 28-01-2009, 08:38 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 28-01-2009, 11:25 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Abiyah - 31-01-2009, 04:42 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de ThorthKa - 02-02-2009, 08:49 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Ryuu - 07-02-2009, 02:25 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 08-03-2009, 12:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 08-03-2009, 01:32 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 08-03-2009, 11:46 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de originalcopy - 09-03-2009, 08:43 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 15-03-2009, 06:51 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 15-03-2009, 07:17 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 16-03-2009, 12:16 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de chrissta - 29-03-2009, 12:13 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 18-04-2009, 12:38 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Yaku-chin - 18-04-2009, 02:41 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 19-04-2009, 08:32 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 17-05-2009, 05:15 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de I hate maths. - 17-05-2009, 06:03 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 17-05-2009, 10:39 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de chrissta - 18-05-2009, 05:34 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de ThorthKa - 21-05-2009, 06:37 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Lithium-Angel - 22-05-2009, 06:23 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Alysu - 22-05-2009, 10:23 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de chrissta - 23-05-2009, 09:45 AM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Dark~Melody - 08-06-2009, 06:12 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de Namine - 08-06-2009, 07:11 PM

RE: The life of a male prostitute (yaoi,shounen ai and normal couples) - de adyna_45 - 09-06-2009, 10:32 PM

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