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You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi]

Ice_angel_234 Deconectat
I love yaoi
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#9
23-08-2008, 12:53 AM
Ma bucur ca ai pus insfarsit cintinuarea.Eram curioasa sa vad ce se mai intampla.Mi-a placut acest capitol...
Greseli am vazut destul de multe.Nu sunt foarte grave insa nu cred ca ai fost prea atenta cand ai scris acest capitol.Am vazut multe greseli de tastare, dupa punct ar trebui sa incepi cu litera mare, insa in unele locuri nu ai facut-o si deasemena ai mult repetitie.Incearca sa o eviti,deoarece nu suna foarte bine.
In rest nu mai am altceva de adaugat,sper sa nu te superi deoarece nu asta imi e intentia.Data viitoare fi mai atenta cand scri si abea astept continuarea.
Gambate! ja ne^
I love yaoi fic because is hot and sexy!!!

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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 31-07-2008, 12:57 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 31-07-2008, 11:34 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-08-2008, 06:57 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 09-08-2008, 01:17 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 22-08-2008, 11:07 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Ice_angel_234 - 23-08-2008, 12:53 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 24-08-2008, 10:57 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 27-08-2008, 02:37 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 17-01-2009, 01:30 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 17-01-2009, 10:41 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 24-01-2009, 02:24 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 24-01-2009, 06:59 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-02-2009, 11:12 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 01-02-2009, 03:39 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-02-2009, 05:11 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 01-02-2009, 06:45 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 03-02-2009, 09:10 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 03-02-2009, 09:51 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 04-02-2009, 07:33 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 05-02-2009, 01:56 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-02-2009, 11:36 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 07-02-2009, 07:15 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 14-02-2009, 12:47 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-02-2009, 12:17 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 15-02-2009, 02:18 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-02-2009, 04:40 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 21-02-2009, 12:31 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 22-02-2009, 02:06 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 28-02-2009, 02:07 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 28-02-2009, 09:42 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 07-03-2009, 02:25 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 08-03-2009, 05:22 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 08-03-2009, 10:02 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 14-03-2009, 06:40 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 15-03-2009, 08:13 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 15-03-2009, 09:06 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 20-03-2009, 09:28 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 28-03-2009, 04:38 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 02-04-2009, 09:17 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 03-04-2009, 11:42 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 03-04-2009, 11:59 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de love_anime - 04-04-2009, 02:15 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 04-04-2009, 06:31 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 05-04-2009, 12:49 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 05-04-2009, 01:20 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 10-04-2009, 11:13 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 11-04-2009, 12:30 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Isis-Zeita iubirii - 11-04-2009, 02:56 AM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 01-05-2009, 03:31 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 02-05-2009, 05:21 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de Teh - 08-06-2009, 12:00 PM
RE: You are just my boy[shonen-ai;yaoi] - de myuu - 08-06-2009, 06:31 PM

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