21-08-2008, 04:58 PM
Da...uite ca am citit si capitolul tau.Parca ii revad pe Akira si Karen in primele capitole..dar sa revin la lucruri importante.Este foarte ciudat sa il vad pe Sasuke intr-o astfel de postura...sa o sarute pe Sakura inca din primul capitol...sa fie atat de vorbaret....e destul de bizar.Si Sakura...wooow!Ce e asta?E o tipa foarte dura...imi place atitudinea ei.Am vazut cateva greseli de tastare...in rest...imi place.Astept urmatorul capitol.
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My sin is Pride.
I'm on my highway to Hell!
Yuki is my kamy-sama. So...Shut the f*** up!
Criticii nu-i pot ranii pe creatori decta cu permisiunea acestora.
You tried to hold me under, I held my breath
Alone and now you wonder, what I possess
Nothing you can say , nothing's gonna change what you've done to me
Now it's time to shine, I'm gonna take what's mine
While you're burning inside my light
Alone and now you wonder, what I possess
Nothing you can say , nothing's gonna change what you've done to me
Now it's time to shine, I'm gonna take what's mine
While you're burning inside my light