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A picture of you

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Mira acest capitol a fost fenomenal, nu ma refer doar la partea in care Sky ii ofera atata placere lui Axel, ci mai mult felul de comportament pe care il are Sky fata de tot ceea ce se petrece in jur. Vad laturi noi ale baiatului, lucru care ma uimeste si ma intriga, plus imi place in mare felul sau de a fi, insa trecerea aceasta de la un Sky adorabil, dragut, inocent, la unul inflacarat, sexy si periculos (ca sa spun asa), e cu totul ceva nou.
Faza cu omenia m-a facut sa inteleg mai multe, totusi trebuie sa parcurg mai mult ca sa inteleg pe deplin viata baiatului si cum si-o va faurii in continuare.
Din cearta s-au vazut multe, plus si acea parte in care parintele nu este de acord inca de la inceput cu deciziile pruncului, dar intr-un final totul e bine dar nu prea. :]]
Incepe sa imi placa din ce in ce mai mult si un alt lucru care m-a uimit si defapt chiar cautam sa fac in ficuri acea lupta pentru dominatie. Bine aici nu pot spune ca s-au vazut prea mult, insa faptul ca dupa Sky a preluat asa de repede tentativa si a fost intr-un fel seme-ul, e uite asta a fost dinamica personajului. Mi-a placut felul in care ai detaliat si modul in care ai finisat bine reactiile baietilor - mai ales a lui Axel.
Ficul e pe placul meu si e si mai bun de atat, minunat!

Nu mai am ce spune inafara de succes in continuare si multe idei! *tighthug*



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A picture of you - de MiraA - 22-04-2011, 09:59 PM
RE: [yaoi] A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 10-12-2011, 10:47 PM
RE: [yaoi] A picture of you - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 02:00 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 10-01-2012, 08:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 12-01-2012, 07:55 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 15-01-2012, 04:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Sushi - 11-02-2012, 01:27 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 23-02-2012, 01:49 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Lexxu - 23-02-2012, 07:12 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 23-02-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: A picture of you - de PervyTeoYaoi_Shinee - 23-02-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: A picture of you - de AbiiShu' - 24-02-2012, 06:26 PM
RE: A picture of you - de rali2009 - 25-02-2012, 12:29 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Blue. - 25-02-2012, 05:13 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 25-02-2012, 11:06 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Sushi - 03-03-2012, 11:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de DiZ - 10-06-2012, 10:26 AM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 10-06-2012, 09:39 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 10-06-2012, 10:06 PM
RE: A picture of you - de AbiiShu' - 11-06-2012, 11:11 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Ciquita - 11-06-2012, 03:48 PM
RE: A picture of you - de kame. - 12-06-2012, 08:48 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 15-06-2012, 08:00 PM
RE: A picture of you - de ArtieS - 15-06-2012, 11:45 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 15-07-2012, 02:46 PM
RE: A picture of you - de kame. - 15-07-2012, 07:47 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 15-07-2012, 08:13 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Sushi - 15-07-2012, 09:41 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Rain - 19-07-2012, 05:28 PM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 23-07-2012, 12:07 AM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 23-07-2012, 09:05 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Lexxu - 23-07-2012, 10:12 AM
RE: A picture of you - de kyra_kyralyne - 24-07-2012, 04:06 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-08-2012, 12:42 PM
RE: A picture of you - de AbiiShu' - 12-08-2012, 09:17 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 20-08-2012, 10:05 AM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 15-09-2012, 10:40 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 15-09-2012, 11:36 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Lexxu - 16-09-2012, 12:29 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 11-10-2012, 10:20 PM
RE: A picture of you - de RosetteFoxy - 12-10-2012, 08:08 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 13-10-2012, 08:01 PM
RE: A picture of you - de MiraA - 25-10-2012, 06:44 PM
RE: A picture of you - de hiimera - 25-10-2012, 08:54 PM
RE: A picture of you - de kame. - 25-10-2012, 09:02 PM
RE: A picture of you - de FuNnY bUnNy - 26-10-2012, 01:39 PM
RE: A picture of you - de RosetteFoxy - 27-10-2012, 06:00 PM
RE: A picture of you - de alice extreme - 01-12-2012, 08:03 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Elyy - 03-12-2012, 08:33 PM
RE: A picture of you - de caramele cu pedale - 07-12-2012, 09:39 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 03-01-2013, 12:53 AM
RE: A picture of you - de Marina. - 09-01-2013, 03:20 AM
RE: A picture of you - de FuNnY bUnNy - 09-01-2013, 09:37 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Natsuru - 11-01-2013, 02:08 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Beatrix LaVey - 12-02-2013, 06:27 PM
RE: A picture of you - de FuNnY bUnNy - 15-02-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Michee - 17-02-2013, 08:03 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Dream_great - 21-02-2013, 04:10 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Dream_great - 26-02-2013, 11:10 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Marina. - 23-03-2013, 02:52 PM
RE: A picture of you - de Kira's Scarlet - 31-03-2013, 08:12 PM
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