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#239
11-03-2012, 08:52 PM
Referitor la întrebare: eu doresc să continui a prelua cereri, căci useri vin şi cer ajutor şi e păcat să-i dezamăgim, aceasta este părerea mea. Eu una voi continua să mă ţin, indiferent de circumstanţe.
Plus nu doar useri au parte de o evoluţie, cât şi noi, critici. <3
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(08-03-2012, 10:51 PM)ღ ღDiaßLaஐஐ A scris: Nick:ღ ღDiaßLaஐஐ
Link la fic:http://animezup.com/forum/showthread.php?tid=29451
Pagina din topic a capitolului/Tot ficul:poezia "razboi"
Numar capitole [pana la momentul actual]:-
Sectiunea [Naruto, Yaoi/Yuri, Proza, Poezie]:poezie
Alte date*: astept parerile voastre in legatura cu tot poemul.


DiaßLa voi prelua cererea ta la poezie. Chiar dacă nu le prea am eu cu astfel de creaţii (lirice), îmi voi spune opinia. Voi reveni cu un edit când am terminat.
Dacă mai doreşte cineva să preia comanda, este bine venit. ^^

Edit: 17 Martie 2012 am terminat această cerere.
| the loner writer |


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Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 10-10-2011, 04:29 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ada - 10-10-2011, 06:35 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 10-10-2011, 06:52 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 10-10-2011, 06:54 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 10-10-2011, 06:55 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 10-10-2011, 10:18 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 10-10-2011, 10:34 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 10-10-2011, 10:42 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de crazy little red - 11-10-2011, 04:10 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 11-10-2011, 04:39 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lithium-Angel - 11-10-2011, 06:05 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 11-10-2011, 08:02 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-10-2011, 08:14 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 22-10-2011, 06:08 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de ^Ciresica^ - 22-10-2011, 08:19 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Anna - 22-10-2011, 08:39 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 22-10-2011, 08:43 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 22-10-2011, 09:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-10-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 22-10-2011, 09:31 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 22-10-2011, 10:05 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-10-2011, 10:50 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 09:59 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 23-10-2011, 11:22 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 23-10-2011, 11:28 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 23-10-2011, 03:55 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 23-10-2011, 04:30 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 23-10-2011, 05:19 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 06:27 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 10:44 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 23-10-2011, 10:53 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 23-10-2011, 11:09 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 11:35 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 11:35 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 11:51 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 11:59 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Leontina - 24-10-2011, 10:07 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 24-10-2011, 10:12 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 09-11-2011, 09:58 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 09-11-2011, 10:20 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 12:35 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 24-10-2011, 12:59 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 01:26 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de i Ramenn. - 24-10-2011, 05:36 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 24-10-2011, 05:44 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 24-10-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 25-10-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 24-10-2011, 09:01 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Beatrix LaVey - 24-10-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 24-10-2011, 09:31 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 24-10-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 25-10-2011, 09:09 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Crissu'Blacker - 25-10-2011, 02:55 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 25-10-2011, 05:22 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 25-10-2011, 10:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de LLC - 26-10-2011, 02:44 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 26-10-2011, 10:11 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 26-10-2011, 10:27 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 26-10-2011, 01:52 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 26-10-2011, 04:16 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 26-10-2011, 05:25 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 26-10-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-10-2011, 09:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-10-2011, 09:27 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 26-10-2011, 09:33 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-10-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-10-2011, 09:35 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 26-10-2011, 09:43 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 26-10-2011, 10:25 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 26-10-2011, 11:06 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 11:01 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-10-2011, 07:14 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 27-10-2011, 09:13 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 27-10-2011, 08:37 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 27-10-2011, 09:22 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 09:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-10-2011, 09:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Serqet - 27-10-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 27-10-2011, 10:20 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 27-10-2011, 10:33 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 27-10-2011, 10:48 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mariah . - 29-10-2011, 07:49 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Pequax - 29-10-2011, 08:00 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 29-10-2011, 08:08 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 29-10-2011, 08:17 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Katniss - 30-10-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 30-10-2011, 02:56 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Too Many Dreams. - 30-10-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 30-10-2011, 04:08 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 30-10-2011, 09:30 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 30-10-2011, 09:46 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 05-11-2011, 01:19 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 06-11-2011, 12:30 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 06-11-2011, 12:52 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 07-11-2011, 09:15 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 07-11-2011, 10:26 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 08-11-2011, 12:13 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 08-11-2011, 01:35 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 08-11-2011, 03:29 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 09-11-2011, 09:40 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 09-11-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 12-11-2011, 01:11 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 19-12-2011, 10:50 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Autumn. - 12-11-2011, 01:20 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 12-11-2011, 02:19 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 02:13 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 13-11-2011, 02:15 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 09:56 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 19-11-2011, 11:48 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 02:48 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 03:07 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 17-11-2011, 01:15 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 03:13 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 18-11-2011, 09:22 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Robb' - 19-11-2011, 12:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 19-11-2011, 12:34 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 19-11-2011, 01:02 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-11-2011, 05:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 19-11-2011, 06:48 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 19-11-2011, 06:59 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 19-11-2011, 08:47 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-11-2011, 10:12 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de sakura_sasuke - 20-11-2011, 06:02 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 20-11-2011, 06:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 20-11-2011, 10:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de i Ramenn. - 21-11-2011, 07:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 21-11-2011, 07:50 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 21-11-2011, 08:22 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de curcubeu fara culori - 04-12-2011, 01:52 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 04-12-2011, 11:04 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 09-12-2011, 01:49 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 09-12-2011, 04:14 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 14-12-2011, 11:26 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 09-12-2011, 05:59 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 09-12-2011, 08:28 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 12:11 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 15-12-2011, 12:39 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 15-12-2011, 04:30 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Julliette . - 15-12-2011, 05:14 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 07:40 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Saravis - 15-12-2011, 07:56 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 08:02 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 15-12-2011, 09:14 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 15-12-2011, 09:32 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 18-12-2011, 03:43 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-12-2011, 10:52 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de mailin - 20-12-2011, 10:56 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 21-12-2011, 12:03 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 21-12-2011, 12:17 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Amy :3 - 21-12-2011, 04:17 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 21-12-2011, 08:15 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 22-12-2011, 09:30 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 29-12-2011, 06:11 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Axel . - 22-12-2011, 09:51 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 22-12-2011, 11:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 23-12-2011, 03:25 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lucifer - 26-12-2011, 01:01 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-12-2011, 01:17 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lucifer - 10-01-2012, 12:08 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-12-2011, 02:41 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mad Hatter - 27-12-2011, 04:16 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 27-12-2011, 11:25 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Saravis - 27-12-2011, 02:25 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 27-12-2011, 03:05 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de YuneSugihara - 27-12-2011, 03:16 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-12-2011, 04:02 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Alle - 27-12-2011, 11:21 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 28-12-2011, 01:20 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 29-12-2011, 05:44 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Katniss - 29-12-2011, 06:58 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Niska - 30-12-2011, 01:16 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Anna - 31-12-2011, 12:11 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 02-01-2012, 12:54 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 31-12-2011, 04:09 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 31-12-2011, 04:44 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Flash - 31-12-2011, 05:50 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 31-12-2011, 06:38 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 02-01-2012, 05:10 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 02-01-2012, 09:26 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 11-01-2012, 01:03 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-01-2012, 03:40 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Flash - 03-01-2012, 12:03 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 03-01-2012, 01:51 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 03-01-2012, 01:58 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 03-01-2012, 03:54 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 07-01-2012, 02:26 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 07-01-2012, 05:49 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 07-01-2012, 07:14 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Kimera - 07-01-2012, 11:48 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Leontina - 10-01-2012, 10:51 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Eve. - 10-01-2012, 11:03 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 10-01-2012, 11:29 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de crazy little red - 13-01-2012, 02:17 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 20-01-2012, 10:28 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-01-2012, 04:08 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ada - 21-01-2012, 06:42 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 21-01-2012, 09:30 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 21-01-2012, 10:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 21-01-2012, 11:34 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 24-01-2012, 10:35 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 22-01-2012, 02:47 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 22-01-2012, 09:10 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 03-02-2012, 11:02 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 22-01-2012, 10:12 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 23-01-2012, 02:11 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 23-01-2012, 09:19 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 23-01-2012, 09:46 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 24-01-2012, 02:21 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 24-01-2012, 09:56 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 05-02-2012, 11:01 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 24-01-2012, 06:17 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 24-01-2012, 10:29 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-01-2012, 04:16 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 29-01-2012, 09:08 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 29-01-2012, 09:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mad Hatter - 29-01-2012, 09:45 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 29-01-2012, 10:03 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 03-02-2012, 11:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de *|Dea|* - 05-02-2012, 02:09 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 05-02-2012, 02:35 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de YuneSugihara - 11-02-2012, 08:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-02-2012, 08:41 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-02-2012, 09:23 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 11-02-2012, 09:51 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-02-2012, 10:39 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Alisha - 22-02-2012, 07:24 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 22-02-2012, 10:12 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Zyklon - 01-03-2012, 05:05 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 01-03-2012, 11:07 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 05-03-2012, 08:59 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 06-03-2012, 04:17 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Diabla - 08-03-2012, 10:51 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-03-2012, 08:52 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 11-03-2012, 08:29 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 11-03-2012, 08:36 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 11-03-2012, 08:40 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 11-03-2012, 09:02 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-03-2012, 09:15 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 11-03-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-03-2012, 09:27 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 12-03-2012, 07:43 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 12-03-2012, 10:12 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 14-03-2012, 10:37 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 15-03-2012, 05:19 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hero1hero - 09-07-2012, 10:22 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 09-07-2012, 10:29 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Thomas - 13-07-2012, 11:45 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 13-07-2012, 12:13 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Erdna - 13-07-2012, 02:40 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Niska - 28-07-2012, 12:26 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mariaa - 22-07-2012, 10:22 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-07-2012, 12:22 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de sickness - 28-07-2012, 06:11 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Niska - 28-07-2012, 09:46 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 28-07-2012, 10:37 AM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 30-07-2012, 06:41 PM
RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 01-08-2012, 11:23 AM

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