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08-03-2012, 10:51 PM

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I do not want to be afraid
I do not want to die inside just to breathe in
I'm tired of feeling so numb
Relief exists I find it when
I am cut

I feel alone here and cold here
Though I don't want to die
But the only anesthetic that makes me feel anything kills inside

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Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 10-10-2011, 04:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ada - 10-10-2011, 06:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 10-10-2011, 06:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 10-10-2011, 06:54 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 10-10-2011, 06:55 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 10-10-2011, 10:18 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 10-10-2011, 10:34 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 10-10-2011, 10:42 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de crazy little red - 11-10-2011, 04:10 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 11-10-2011, 04:39 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lithium-Angel - 11-10-2011, 06:05 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 11-10-2011, 08:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-10-2011, 08:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 22-10-2011, 06:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de ^Ciresica^ - 22-10-2011, 08:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Anna - 22-10-2011, 08:39 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 22-10-2011, 08:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 22-10-2011, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-10-2011, 09:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 22-10-2011, 09:31 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 22-10-2011, 10:05 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-10-2011, 10:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 09:59 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 23-10-2011, 11:22 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 23-10-2011, 11:28 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 23-10-2011, 03:55 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 23-10-2011, 04:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 23-10-2011, 05:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 06:27 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 10:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 23-10-2011, 10:53 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 23-10-2011, 11:09 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 11:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 11:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-10-2011, 11:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 23-10-2011, 11:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Leontina - 24-10-2011, 10:07 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 24-10-2011, 10:12 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 09-11-2011, 09:58 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 09-11-2011, 10:20 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 12:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 24-10-2011, 12:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 01:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de i Ramenn. - 24-10-2011, 05:36 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 24-10-2011, 05:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 24-10-2011, 08:53 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 24-10-2011, 08:53 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 25-10-2011, 10:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 24-10-2011, 09:01 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Beatrix LaVey - 24-10-2011, 09:28 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 24-10-2011, 09:31 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 24-10-2011, 09:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 25-10-2011, 09:09 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Crissu'Blacker - 25-10-2011, 02:55 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 25-10-2011, 05:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 25-10-2011, 10:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de LLC - 26-10-2011, 02:44 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 26-10-2011, 10:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 26-10-2011, 10:27 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 26-10-2011, 01:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 26-10-2011, 04:16 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 26-10-2011, 05:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 26-10-2011, 05:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-10-2011, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-10-2011, 09:27 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 26-10-2011, 09:33 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-10-2011, 10:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-10-2011, 09:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 26-10-2011, 09:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 26-10-2011, 10:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 26-10-2011, 11:06 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 11:01 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-10-2011, 07:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 27-10-2011, 09:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 27-10-2011, 08:37 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 27-10-2011, 09:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-10-2011, 09:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Serqet - 27-10-2011, 10:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 27-10-2011, 10:20 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 27-10-2011, 10:33 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Aly - 27-10-2011, 10:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mariah . - 29-10-2011, 07:49 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Pequax - 29-10-2011, 08:00 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 29-10-2011, 08:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 29-10-2011, 08:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Katniss - 30-10-2011, 02:33 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 30-10-2011, 02:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Too Many Dreams. - 30-10-2011, 03:57 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 30-10-2011, 04:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 30-10-2011, 09:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 30-10-2011, 09:46 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 05-11-2011, 01:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 06-11-2011, 12:30 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 06-11-2011, 12:52 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 07-11-2011, 09:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 07-11-2011, 10:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 08-11-2011, 12:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 08-11-2011, 01:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 08-11-2011, 03:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 09-11-2011, 09:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 09-11-2011, 11:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 12-11-2011, 01:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 19-12-2011, 10:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Autumn. - 12-11-2011, 01:20 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 12-11-2011, 02:19 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 02:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 13-11-2011, 02:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 09:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 19-11-2011, 11:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 02:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 13-11-2011, 03:07 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 17-11-2011, 01:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 03:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 18-11-2011, 09:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Robb' - 19-11-2011, 12:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 19-11-2011, 12:34 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 19-11-2011, 01:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-11-2011, 05:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 19-11-2011, 06:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 19-11-2011, 06:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 19-11-2011, 08:47 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-11-2011, 10:12 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de sakura_sasuke - 20-11-2011, 06:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 20-11-2011, 06:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 20-11-2011, 10:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de i Ramenn. - 21-11-2011, 07:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 21-11-2011, 07:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 21-11-2011, 08:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de curcubeu fara culori - 04-12-2011, 01:52 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 04-12-2011, 11:04 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 09-12-2011, 01:49 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 09-12-2011, 04:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 14-12-2011, 11:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 09-12-2011, 05:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 09-12-2011, 08:28 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 12:11 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 15-12-2011, 12:39 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 15-12-2011, 04:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Julliette . - 15-12-2011, 05:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 07:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Saravis - 15-12-2011, 07:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 15-12-2011, 08:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 15-12-2011, 09:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 15-12-2011, 09:32 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 18-12-2011, 03:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 19-12-2011, 10:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de mailin - 20-12-2011, 10:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 21-12-2011, 12:03 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 21-12-2011, 12:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Amy :3 - 21-12-2011, 04:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 21-12-2011, 08:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 22-12-2011, 09:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 29-12-2011, 06:11 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Axel . - 22-12-2011, 09:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de SnowFlake. - 22-12-2011, 11:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 23-12-2011, 03:25 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lucifer - 26-12-2011, 01:01 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 26-12-2011, 01:17 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lucifer - 10-01-2012, 12:08 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-12-2011, 02:41 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mad Hatter - 27-12-2011, 04:16 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 27-12-2011, 11:25 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Saravis - 27-12-2011, 02:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 27-12-2011, 03:05 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de YuneSugihara - 27-12-2011, 03:16 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 27-12-2011, 04:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Alle - 27-12-2011, 11:21 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Addeh - 28-12-2011, 01:20 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ana - 29-12-2011, 05:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Katniss - 29-12-2011, 06:58 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Niska - 30-12-2011, 01:16 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Anna - 31-12-2011, 12:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 02-01-2012, 12:54 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 31-12-2011, 04:09 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 31-12-2011, 04:44 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Flash - 31-12-2011, 05:50 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 31-12-2011, 06:38 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 02-01-2012, 05:10 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 02-01-2012, 09:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de BloodyInnocence - 11-01-2012, 01:03 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-01-2012, 03:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Flash - 03-01-2012, 12:03 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 03-01-2012, 01:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 03-01-2012, 01:58 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Cherie - 03-01-2012, 03:54 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 07-01-2012, 02:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 07-01-2012, 05:49 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 07-01-2012, 07:14 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Kimera - 07-01-2012, 11:48 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Leontina - 10-01-2012, 10:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Eve. - 10-01-2012, 11:03 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 10-01-2012, 11:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de crazy little red - 13-01-2012, 02:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 20-01-2012, 10:28 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 22-01-2012, 04:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ada - 21-01-2012, 06:42 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 21-01-2012, 09:30 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 21-01-2012, 10:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 21-01-2012, 11:34 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 24-01-2012, 10:35 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 22-01-2012, 02:47 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 22-01-2012, 09:10 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 03-02-2012, 11:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 22-01-2012, 10:12 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 23-01-2012, 02:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Abbeh. - 23-01-2012, 09:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de CyBeR - 23-01-2012, 09:46 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 24-01-2012, 02:21 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 24-01-2012, 09:56 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 05-02-2012, 11:01 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Wolves - 24-01-2012, 06:17 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de onu' - 24-01-2012, 10:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 26-01-2012, 04:16 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nirv - 29-01-2012, 09:08 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 29-01-2012, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mad Hatter - 29-01-2012, 09:45 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 29-01-2012, 10:03 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de MiraA - 03-02-2012, 11:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de *|Dea|* - 05-02-2012, 02:09 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 05-02-2012, 02:35 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de YuneSugihara - 11-02-2012, 08:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-02-2012, 08:41 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-02-2012, 09:23 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Ayumi Michaelis - 11-02-2012, 09:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-02-2012, 10:39 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Alisha - 22-02-2012, 07:24 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 22-02-2012, 10:12 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Zyklon - 01-03-2012, 05:05 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 01-03-2012, 11:07 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Miss M - 05-03-2012, 08:59 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 06-03-2012, 04:17 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Diabla - 08-03-2012, 10:51 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-03-2012, 08:52 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 11-03-2012, 08:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 11-03-2012, 08:36 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Fiction - 11-03-2012, 08:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 11-03-2012, 09:02 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 11-03-2012, 09:15 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 11-03-2012, 09:25 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 11-03-2012, 09:27 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de .Ema - 12-03-2012, 07:43 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 12-03-2012, 10:12 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Nya. - 14-03-2012, 10:37 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rose ^^ - 15-03-2012, 05:19 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hero1hero - 09-07-2012, 10:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 09-07-2012, 10:29 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Thomas - 13-07-2012, 11:45 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 13-07-2012, 12:13 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Erdna - 13-07-2012, 02:40 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Niska - 28-07-2012, 12:26 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Mariaa - 22-07-2012, 10:22 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de hiimera - 23-07-2012, 12:22 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de sickness - 28-07-2012, 06:11 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Niska - 28-07-2012, 09:46 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Lia - 28-07-2012, 10:37 AM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Rain - 30-07-2012, 06:41 PM

RE: Cerere de Critics - de Daria - 01-08-2012, 11:23 AM

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