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You and I

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(:((:((:(( Te roog pune next-ul repede!!! De ce au murit?:( Offffff!)
Scuze! Sunt mult prea atrasa de el incat mi-a fot greu sa nu tip cand am citit ultima propozitie. Insa nu inteleg cine a sunat-o?;-? In orice caz, actiunea este buna nu fuge ca la maraton, dialogul e interesant imi place mult faza cu "Bad Girl" la Sakura si "Angel" la Sauke. Decrierea este insa nu foate multa, adica nu ai descri holulrile liceului, nici baia, nici costumatia prea mult. Insa compesenzi prin faptul ca descrii sentimentele forte bine. Dupa parerea mea ai cam toate cele necesare sa nu te lasi de fic vreodata pana ce la ultimul capitol va crie THE END to be continued:)):)) Spor la lucru si sa vii repede cu next-ulll>:D<
~~ Just because You know my NAME doesn't mean you know Me!~~
\TrUsT YoUr CrAzY iDeAs/

L, did you know Death Gods only eat apples??



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
You and I - de Piersicuta - 01-10-2011, 04:23 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de .: Em :. - 02-10-2011, 05:25 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 04-10-2011, 07:48 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 04-10-2011, 08:41 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Twisty Emerald - 04-10-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Miranda. - 05-10-2011, 07:35 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 07-10-2011, 07:27 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de ^Ciresica^ - 08-10-2011, 08:24 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 09-10-2011, 03:04 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 11-10-2011, 06:23 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 11-10-2011, 06:55 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 22-10-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 24-10-2011, 03:14 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 24-10-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 24-10-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de ^Ciresica^ - 26-10-2011, 07:32 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 29-10-2011, 01:39 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Prevented :D - 30-10-2011, 09:53 AM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 30-10-2011, 08:47 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 04-11-2011, 05:22 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 04-11-2011, 07:28 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de .: Em :. - 06-11-2011, 05:47 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 08-11-2011, 09:14 AM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 10-11-2011, 10:48 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 10-11-2011, 11:21 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Ayumi Michaelis - 10-11-2011, 11:50 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 25-11-2011, 06:54 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de ~FreaKy and CuTe~xD - 27-11-2011, 01:00 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 27-11-2011, 02:43 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de ^Ciresica^ - 29-11-2011, 08:19 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Piersicuta - 01-12-2011, 01:18 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Rose ^^ - 01-12-2011, 10:06 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de ^Ciresica^ - 03-12-2011, 12:19 PM
RE: You and I [+18/+19] - de Prevented :D - 05-12-2011, 04:20 PM
RE: You and I [naruto][+18] - de Piersicuta - 30-12-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: You and I [naruto][+18] - de Prevented :D - 30-12-2011, 09:27 PM
RE: You and I [naruto][+18] - de Bonnie - 30-12-2011, 11:49 PM
RE: You and I [naruto][+18] - de Miranda. - 01-01-2012, 06:25 PM
RE: You and I [naruto][+18] - de Rose ^^ - 08-01-2012, 12:13 AM


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