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Our Game

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Heya! Stiu ca vin cu intarziere... dar nu stiu ce a fost cu mine. A da pc-ul stricat si teama sa nu ma prinda tata la laptop pe yao :)) Mi-a placut mult acest capitol, mai ales faza de final la care am ras :)) defapt am ras la mai multe. Partida afost minunata! Chiar daca mai scurta, tot minunata. Abia astept si urmatorul capitol. Sti perfect sa pozitionezi cuplurile. Adica dupa un fel de "impacare" sau liniste dintre cei principali, ai pus capitolul asta. Greseli au fost cateva din graba si niste repetitii prin text. Cam atat XD

Psycho XD



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Our Game - de Denny - 03-09-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Piersicuta - 31-12-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Kimera - 01-01-2012, 10:16 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Denny - 02-01-2012, 12:55 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de dot dot curve :) - 02-01-2012, 10:56 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Kimera - 02-01-2012, 02:09 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Zyklon - 02-01-2012, 11:37 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Piersicuta - 02-01-2012, 01:53 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alistar - 02-01-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 04-01-2012, 10:50 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Death Rose - 05-01-2012, 10:23 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de βεκi - 07-01-2012, 02:26 PM
RE: Our Game - de Denny - 29-01-2012, 09:10 PM
RE: Our Game - de Kimera - 30-01-2012, 08:59 PM
RE: Our Game - de AbiiShu' - 30-01-2012, 06:55 PM
RE: Our Game - de Alistar - 31-01-2012, 02:28 AM
RE: Our Game - de Denny - 02-08-2012, 03:30 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de AbiiShu' - 02-08-2012, 06:25 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Lexxu - 03-08-2012, 06:45 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Denny - 20-08-2012, 02:15 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Lexxu - 20-08-2012, 03:21 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 03-09-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 04-09-2011, 04:03 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 04-09-2011, 10:13 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-09-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 06-09-2011, 12:06 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 06-09-2011, 12:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 06-09-2011, 12:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 06-09-2011, 02:58 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 06-09-2011, 02:58 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 06-09-2011, 09:23 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de HanniGram - 06-09-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 06-09-2011, 10:09 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alicia - 09-09-2011, 10:18 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 09-09-2011, 11:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 10-09-2011, 12:23 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 10-09-2011, 11:49 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 10-09-2011, 03:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 10-09-2011, 04:56 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 10-09-2011, 05:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 10-09-2011, 07:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alicia - 12-09-2011, 02:15 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 15-09-2011, 04:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 15-09-2011, 04:36 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 15-09-2011, 11:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 18-09-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 19-09-2011, 07:35 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 19-09-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 23-09-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 23-09-2011, 09:02 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 24-09-2011, 10:24 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 24-09-2011, 12:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 26-09-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 27-09-2011, 08:37 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 28-09-2011, 08:50 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 03-10-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 04-10-2011, 05:04 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-10-2011, 08:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 06-10-2011, 08:45 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 06-10-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 07-10-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 08-10-2011, 12:33 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 08-10-2011, 03:39 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 08-10-2011, 09:34 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 08-10-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 08-10-2011, 12:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 08-10-2011, 01:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 08-10-2011, 02:25 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 08-10-2011, 09:38 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 16-10-2011, 10:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 16-10-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 17-10-2011, 03:36 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 17-10-2011, 03:41 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 17-10-2011, 04:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 17-10-2011, 11:29 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 18-10-2011, 03:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 18-10-2011, 09:27 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 24-10-2011, 07:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 24-10-2011, 07:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 24-10-2011, 07:51 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 25-10-2011, 09:31 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 25-10-2011, 10:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 30-10-2011, 01:41 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 30-10-2011, 10:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de n{iK}a aMmA - 31-10-2011, 12:02 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 31-10-2011, 09:30 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 31-10-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 31-10-2011, 05:53 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 31-10-2011, 06:31 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 01-11-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 01-11-2011, 11:39 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 08-11-2011, 09:14 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 09-11-2011, 10:08 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 09-11-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 10-11-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 11-11-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Nirv - 11-11-2011, 09:43 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 13-11-2011, 07:21 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 08:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 21-11-2011, 04:16 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 21-11-2011, 04:34 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 22-11-2011, 09:38 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Nirv - 22-11-2011, 08:34 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alle|X|Andra - 22-11-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 25-11-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 26-11-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Luzer - 30-11-2011, 09:09 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de n{iK}a aMmA - 04-12-2011, 10:57 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 04-12-2011, 11:41 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-12-2011, 01:00 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 05-12-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 05-12-2011, 07:24 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de n{iK}a aMmA - 10-12-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 10-12-2011, 05:40 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Nirv - 11-12-2011, 05:11 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Denny - 13-12-2011, 01:27 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Zyklon - 13-12-2011, 04:21 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de n{iK}a aMmA - 13-12-2011, 04:37 PM
[split] [+18] Our Game - de Nirv - 13-12-2011, 10:13 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 13-12-2011, 11:59 PM


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