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Deci, cum ti-am zis si pe messenger, multe greseli, dar am aflat ca-s din neatentie. Bun, 1. daca tot scrii noaptea si nu-ti merge bine tastatura, corecteaza dimineata cand esti odihnita si poti sa le depistezi, 2. ah -mai mult e critica, deci, la critici bag. :-b Chesti cu "va" despartit la viitor ai zis ca e pura neatentie, deci te cred, dar data viitoare fii mai atenta. Nu mai lasa space inainte de semnul exclamarii sau cel al intrebarii. Cum ti-am zis atunci cu "am luat-o cu mine", incearca sa explici, ca nu cred ca-s eu atat de batuta in cap cat sa nu inteleg, dar asa pare --> ma refer la "pe mine", nu "cu mine", dar eu nu am inteles la ce s-a referit (ca a luat-o cu el, nu pe el -dar lucruri mai putin importante). Litere lipse, virgule, cuvinte (chiar la sfarsit ai uitat sa faci referinta la persoana or something like this, nu sunt sigura cum sa ma exprim :-??) naratiunea si descrierea nu prea imi plac, nu pot spune deloc pentru ca e destul de interesanta povestea si asta e bine. Oricum, mi-am dat seama ca Hun e maica-sa. >.> Adica, asa-s eu, mai paranoica dar I am cul (b-) chestie care e logica si vine de la sine, un detaliu bine cunoscut, deci trec peste alte laude asupra mea -asupra perfectiunii care era sa faca cunostinta cu bordura). Anyway, atat de "multe" greseli, si chiar daca ar fi fost mai putine, tot mi-ar fi fost lene sa le enumar. :-?? That's me.

Si cum ziceam, masina e bengoasa rau. b-)
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[edit] Tipa mai de jos: iti lasam eu locul meu, dar asa e cand "Cine se trezeste dimineata, departe ajunge". :-b Si pana la urma, conteaza ceea ce scrii si felul in care te exprimi, nu daca esti intaielea sau al optisprazecelea sau mai stiu eu al catalea. Pana la urma, e atat de imporntat? /:) Lamuriti-ma "vreau sa fiu printre primii", ca va vad mai pe oriunde cu "Loc rezervat", "Sunt prima!", "Sunt a doua!", de parca viata tine cont de asta. :-b Banalitati de mucosi*.

*va deranjeaza "mucosi"? girly merge? Ca baietii nu fac asta, Allah cu ei si cu mitocania lor! ^:)^

[edit2] Cum imi dai tu mie detalii si toate cele despre fic. >:D< Multumesc, oricum pe mine nimic nu ma surpinde si deja banuiesc si cand o fac, sunt sigura de banuiala. =]] Me.
"Forgive you? Why? It's not like I'm mad or anything. You were the one who got angry; just like you said, I was being too nosy. I've always been like that, not knowing my boundaries. I'm the type who'll water a plant til it drowns."
- Yokozawa Takafumi no Baai, vol. 2



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Our Game - de Denny - 03-09-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Piersicuta - 31-12-2011, 05:45 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Kimera - 01-01-2012, 10:16 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Denny - 02-01-2012, 12:55 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de dot dot curve :) - 02-01-2012, 10:56 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Kimera - 02-01-2012, 02:09 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Zyklon - 02-01-2012, 11:37 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Piersicuta - 02-01-2012, 01:53 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alistar - 02-01-2012, 04:44 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 04-01-2012, 10:50 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Death Rose - 05-01-2012, 10:23 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de βεκi - 07-01-2012, 02:26 PM
RE: Our Game - de Denny - 29-01-2012, 09:10 PM
RE: Our Game - de Kimera - 30-01-2012, 08:59 PM
RE: Our Game - de AbiiShu' - 30-01-2012, 06:55 PM
RE: Our Game - de Alistar - 31-01-2012, 02:28 AM
RE: Our Game - de Denny - 02-08-2012, 03:30 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de AbiiShu' - 02-08-2012, 06:25 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Lexxu - 03-08-2012, 06:45 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Denny - 20-08-2012, 02:15 PM
RE: [Yaoi] Our Game - de Lexxu - 20-08-2012, 03:21 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 03-09-2011, 11:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 04-09-2011, 04:03 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 04-09-2011, 10:13 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-09-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 06-09-2011, 12:06 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 06-09-2011, 12:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 06-09-2011, 12:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 06-09-2011, 02:58 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 06-09-2011, 02:58 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 06-09-2011, 09:23 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de HanniGram - 06-09-2011, 09:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 06-09-2011, 10:09 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alicia - 09-09-2011, 10:18 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 09-09-2011, 11:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 10-09-2011, 12:23 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 10-09-2011, 11:49 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 10-09-2011, 03:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de yaoi maniac - 10-09-2011, 04:56 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 10-09-2011, 05:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 10-09-2011, 07:57 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alicia - 12-09-2011, 02:15 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 15-09-2011, 04:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 15-09-2011, 04:36 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 15-09-2011, 11:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 18-09-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 19-09-2011, 07:35 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 19-09-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 23-09-2011, 08:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 23-09-2011, 09:02 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 24-09-2011, 10:24 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 24-09-2011, 12:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 26-09-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 27-09-2011, 08:37 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 28-09-2011, 08:50 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 03-10-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 04-10-2011, 05:04 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-10-2011, 08:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 06-10-2011, 08:45 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 06-10-2011, 02:51 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 07-10-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 08-10-2011, 12:33 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 08-10-2011, 03:39 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 08-10-2011, 09:34 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 08-10-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 08-10-2011, 12:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 08-10-2011, 01:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 08-10-2011, 02:25 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 08-10-2011, 09:38 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 16-10-2011, 10:28 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 16-10-2011, 11:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 17-10-2011, 03:36 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 17-10-2011, 03:41 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 17-10-2011, 04:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 17-10-2011, 11:29 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 18-10-2011, 03:05 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Yaku-chin - 18-10-2011, 09:27 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 24-10-2011, 07:45 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 24-10-2011, 07:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 24-10-2011, 07:51 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 25-10-2011, 09:31 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 25-10-2011, 10:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de sarah chan - 30-10-2011, 01:41 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 30-10-2011, 10:17 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de n{iK}a aMmA - 31-10-2011, 12:02 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 31-10-2011, 09:30 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 31-10-2011, 04:15 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 31-10-2011, 05:53 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 31-10-2011, 06:31 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de hiimera - 01-11-2011, 11:48 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de AyameXx - 01-11-2011, 11:39 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 08-11-2011, 09:14 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 09-11-2011, 10:08 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 09-11-2011, 10:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 10-11-2011, 04:59 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 11-11-2011, 09:03 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Nirv - 11-11-2011, 09:43 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 13-11-2011, 07:21 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Addeh - 13-11-2011, 08:19 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 21-11-2011, 04:16 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 21-11-2011, 04:34 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 22-11-2011, 09:38 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Nirv - 22-11-2011, 08:34 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Alle|X|Andra - 22-11-2011, 11:01 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Piersicuta - 25-11-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 26-11-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Luzer - 30-11-2011, 09:09 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de n{iK}a aMmA - 04-12-2011, 10:57 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Denny - 04-12-2011, 11:41 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de βεκi - 05-12-2011, 01:00 AM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de Zyklon - 05-12-2011, 03:59 PM
RE: Our Game [+18] - de dot dot curve :) - 05-12-2011, 07:24 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de n{iK}a aMmA - 10-12-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 10-12-2011, 05:40 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Nirv - 11-12-2011, 05:11 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Denny - 13-12-2011, 01:27 AM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Zyklon - 13-12-2011, 04:21 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de n{iK}a aMmA - 13-12-2011, 04:37 PM
[split] [+18] Our Game - de Nirv - 13-12-2011, 10:13 PM
RE: [+18] Our Game - de Alle|X|Andra - 13-12-2011, 11:59 PM


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