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Cand viata se complica

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Buna, mersi de anunt ^^
Am citit putin din capitol, voi lasa si comentariul, nu stiu daca azi ca deja e tarziu si sunt cam obosita, sa vad daca reusesc sa citesc tot, dar maine sigur il voi lasa. Voi da edit.

Edit: Asa, am terminat de citit si trebuie sa recunosc ca am ramas socata, ceva gen O_O". Lizzie ori e nebuna ori e pre afectata de tot ceea ce i se intampla pentru a se mai gandi la consecinte. Sper din tot sufletul ca a doua varianta e corecta.
Trecand peste. Capitolulu mi s-a parut foarte tare, dar cum perfectiunea nu exista am si ceva de criticat. Cand a spus Lizzie ca fratele ei il ameninta pe tasu'; nu imi amintesc sa mai fi mentionat ceva legat de amenintari. Daca ma insel si cumva nu-mi mai aminyesc eu te-as ruga sa-mi zici si mie in care capitol ai zis. E posibil sa fi uitat eu, se mai intampla. Iar in cazul in care asta e prima oara cand ai mentionat acest mic detaliu ar fi trebuit sa dai mai multe detalii des[re acele amenintari.
Greseli de tastare, am vazut vreo doua-trei, dar nimic grav, deci nu le enumar.
La capitolul descrierea sentimentelor e bine, nici eu nu sunt experta in a observa aceste lucruri, dar ai zis ca vor urma si astfel de chestii mai mult, tu stii. Oricum presupun ca Lizzie e destul de socata de tot ceea ce s-a intamplat.
Si cum nu ma pot abtine voi da quote la partea care mi s-a parut cea mai tare din acets capitol si la care mai aveam un pic si ma bufnea rasul:
Citat:- In primul rand “omul de stat” este tatal meu cel mincinos, care nu e tatal meu, dar asta nu congteaza acum. Cum vroiai sa indur toate aberatiile pe care le spunea? In al doilea rand asta nu e colegul de banca, e fratele meu geaman si am tot dreptul sa-i urez la multi ani, cand vreau. In al treilea rand, stii bine ca sunt in stare sa sar asa, eram in stare de asta si fara sa stiu de puterile mele. Si acele documente le-am gasit din greseala, nici nu stiam ca eu sunt acea Eliza, credeam ca eu sunt Elizabeth Rose. Oricum nu cred ca Arnolds stie ca le aveti. In ultimul rand, am invatat sa merg pe motocicleta, ceea ce e tare.

Pai, cam atat. La ce intorsatura au inceput sa ia lucrurile la tine si la ce mi-ai spus pe profil, cred ca mai avem vreo 3 capitole de soc pana sa se mai linisteasca lucrurile. Iar la cum au fost pana acum... sper doar sa nu ne dai vreun infarct, ceva...:)) Glumesc.
Astept cu nerabdare continuarea >:d<
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Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 06-08-2011, 09:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 10-08-2011, 11:38 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Fiction - 11-08-2011, 01:52 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 11-08-2011, 11:58 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 11-08-2011, 12:32 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 12-08-2011, 10:49 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 12-08-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 13-08-2011, 12:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 13-08-2011, 07:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 13-08-2011, 09:24 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 14-08-2011, 08:01 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 14-08-2011, 09:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 16-08-2011, 12:13 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 16-08-2011, 07:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 17-08-2011, 02:38 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 17-08-2011, 03:06 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 17-08-2011, 04:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 18-08-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 18-08-2011, 01:00 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 18-08-2011, 08:06 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 18-08-2011, 09:20 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 19-08-2011, 01:48 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 19-08-2011, 02:22 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 20-08-2011, 08:37 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 20-08-2011, 09:50 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 22-08-2011, 12:49 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 22-08-2011, 01:48 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 23-08-2011, 03:03 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 23-08-2011, 03:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 24-08-2011, 12:34 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 24-08-2011, 01:26 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 25-08-2011, 09:57 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 25-08-2011, 10:22 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 26-08-2011, 04:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 26-08-2011, 05:10 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 27-08-2011, 04:21 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 27-08-2011, 10:11 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 27-08-2011, 11:40 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 28-08-2011, 10:01 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 28-08-2011, 01:08 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 28-08-2011, 01:44 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 28-08-2011, 03:11 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 29-08-2011, 11:44 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 29-08-2011, 12:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 29-08-2011, 03:17 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 29-08-2011, 03:20 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 30-08-2011, 11:12 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 30-08-2011, 11:53 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 30-08-2011, 12:17 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 31-08-2011, 10:22 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 31-08-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 31-08-2011, 11:20 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 01-09-2011, 10:13 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 01-09-2011, 10:32 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 01-09-2011, 12:35 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 02-09-2011, 10:12 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 02-09-2011, 11:33 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 02-09-2011, 11:37 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 02-09-2011, 11:53 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 03-09-2011, 07:20 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 03-09-2011, 08:14 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 04-09-2011, 07:06 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 04-09-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 05-09-2011, 08:09 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 05-09-2011, 10:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 06-09-2011, 06:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 06-09-2011, 07:13 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 07-09-2011, 12:55 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 07-09-2011, 09:04 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 07-09-2011, 11:54 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 08-09-2011, 07:19 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 08-09-2011, 11:06 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 08-09-2011, 08:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 08-09-2011, 09:08 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 09-09-2011, 05:34 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 10-09-2011, 10:47 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 10-09-2011, 01:36 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 10-09-2011, 11:44 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 16-09-2011, 08:53 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 17-09-2011, 10:37 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 17-09-2011, 01:53 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 25-09-2011, 11:07 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 25-09-2011, 11:47 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 25-09-2011, 02:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 02-10-2011, 05:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 02-10-2011, 07:33 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 04-10-2011, 09:34 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 04-10-2011, 09:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 05-10-2011, 04:08 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 10-10-2011, 09:26 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 11-10-2011, 01:05 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 11-10-2011, 02:56 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 13-10-2011, 08:47 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 13-10-2011, 09:45 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de hiimera - 15-10-2011, 01:48 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 21-10-2011, 10:20 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 21-10-2011, 05:27 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 27-10-2011, 08:54 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Akane Hime - 27-10-2011, 09:11 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 28-10-2011, 02:50 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Blanket - 28-10-2011, 06:46 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 31-10-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 01-11-2011, 11:27 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 06-11-2011, 09:01 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Googga - 06-11-2011, 09:46 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 20-11-2011, 09:39 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 21-11-2011, 09:24 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Googga - 25-11-2011, 12:57 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 08-12-2011, 09:52 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 08-12-2011, 11:02 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 11-12-2011, 07:41 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 11-12-2011, 08:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 25-12-2011, 08:18 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 26-12-2011, 04:43 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Blanket - 27-12-2011, 04:04 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de LoLix - 31-12-2011, 01:12 AM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 07-01-2012, 07:58 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 07-01-2012, 08:16 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Miss M - 12-01-2012, 08:31 PM
RE: Life is complicated - de Leontina - 13-01-2012, 08:59 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 29-01-2012, 10:01 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 31-01-2012, 12:45 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de ~Dana~ - 02-02-2012, 12:30 AM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 04-02-2012, 09:44 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 05-02-2012, 12:56 AM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 09-02-2012, 09:18 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 09-02-2012, 09:56 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 10-02-2012, 01:13 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 25-02-2012, 09:59 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 26-02-2012, 09:42 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 26-02-2012, 10:09 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 13-03-2012, 10:17 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 14-03-2012, 06:05 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 15-03-2012, 08:40 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 12-04-2012, 06:01 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de matzaplouata - 15-05-2012, 06:52 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 08-06-2012, 08:22 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 09-06-2012, 02:35 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Chris`sCookie - 09-06-2012, 03:03 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 19-06-2012, 08:34 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 20-06-2012, 09:15 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 21-06-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 29-06-2012, 06:35 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 30-06-2012, 12:39 AM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 01-07-2012, 09:25 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 12-07-2012, 10:15 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Leontina - 14-07-2012, 12:58 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 20-07-2012, 06:55 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Miss M - 20-07-2012, 09:02 PM
RE: Cand viata se complica - de Skywalker - 14-09-2012, 08:57 PM


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