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More Than Love...[+16/+17]

Miranda. Deconectat
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#89
26-08-2011, 04:58 PM
helloo
Imi pare rau ca am pierdut un capitol, am fost plecata de acasa... O sa comentez ambele capitole... Primul: La Flash Back spuneai ceva de genul "... daca o sa mor, macar o sa-l revad pe tata...", dar la final ai spus ca "... au murit impreuna... ". Deci au murit in acelasi timp ? Daca gresec eu, imi cer scuze, dar asa am retinut. Al doilea: Sa bea alcool in starea in care este ? Este nebuna. Descrierea, naratiunea, dialogul, sunt bune.

:bye:



Răspunsuri în acest subiect
More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 11:31 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 16-07-2011, 01:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 05:28 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 06:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-07-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de stylish.lov3 - 17-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 17-07-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-07-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-07-2011, 08:56 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-07-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 20-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 21-07-2011, 11:27 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 22-07-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 23-07-2011, 12:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 23-07-2011, 01:36 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 23-07-2011, 01:50 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 23-07-2011, 08:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 25-07-2011, 09:18 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 25-07-2011, 10:59 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 25-07-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-07-2011, 01:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 27-07-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 27-07-2011, 03:04 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 27-07-2011, 04:37 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 27-07-2011, 04:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Laura ♥ - 27-07-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-07-2011, 12:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 29-07-2011, 02:34 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 01-08-2011, 11:16 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 05-08-2011, 01:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 06-08-2011, 04:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 07-08-2011, 11:06 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 07-08-2011, 11:30 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 08-08-2011, 09:40 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 08-08-2011, 11:41 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 09-08-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 10-08-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 09:55 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 11-08-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 12-08-2011, 12:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 12-08-2011, 02:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 12-08-2011, 08:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 15-08-2011, 12:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 15-08-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 15-08-2011, 05:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-08-2011, 10:39 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-08-2011, 08:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 17-08-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Prevented :D - 18-08-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-08-2011, 10:34 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 19-08-2011, 02:43 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-08-2011, 07:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 20-08-2011, 11:26 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 22-08-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 24-08-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-08-2011, 04:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-08-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 29-08-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 31-08-2011, 11:01 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 31-08-2011, 03:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 02-09-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 02-09-2011, 04:13 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 03-09-2011, 07:02 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 03-09-2011, 07:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Lorely - 23-10-2011, 12:32 AM


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