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More Than Love...[+16/+17]

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#58
12-08-2011, 02:52 PM
Salutare Elz! : ]

Alt capitol superb. Ce as putea zice? Te descurci absolut minunat. Nu am cuvinte. Naratiunea a fost ok. Narezi foarte frumos. Dialogul.. doua replici. Nu foarte mult, chiar destul de putin. Ah, asta e foarte bine. Nu arunci o gramada de liniute de dialog peste tot. Descrierea a fost cireasa de pe tort. Descri asa de frumos sentimentele. Greseli de tastare nu am vazut, sincer. Cine s-a mai uitat dupa ele cand capitolul a fost asa de frumos? Actiunea nu este deloc fugarita. Deabea astept sa vad ce se va intampla in continuare. Sas'ke! Poate moare sau il pierde pe bebe din cauza ta ca ii grav. :-w Vin si te fac feli si feliute dupa care te serversc Sakurei la desert.

Te astept cu nextul. : ]
Bafta si multa, multa inspiratie in continuare.

Bye, bye.
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 11:31 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 16-07-2011, 01:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 05:28 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 06:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-07-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de stylish.lov3 - 17-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 17-07-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-07-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-07-2011, 08:56 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-07-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 20-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 21-07-2011, 11:27 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 22-07-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 23-07-2011, 12:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 23-07-2011, 01:36 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 23-07-2011, 01:50 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 23-07-2011, 08:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 25-07-2011, 09:18 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 25-07-2011, 10:59 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 25-07-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-07-2011, 01:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 27-07-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 27-07-2011, 03:04 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 27-07-2011, 04:37 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 27-07-2011, 04:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Laura ♥ - 27-07-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-07-2011, 12:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 29-07-2011, 02:34 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 01-08-2011, 11:16 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 05-08-2011, 01:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 06-08-2011, 04:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 07-08-2011, 11:06 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 07-08-2011, 11:30 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 08-08-2011, 09:40 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 08-08-2011, 11:41 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 09-08-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 10-08-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 09:55 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 11-08-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 12-08-2011, 12:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 12-08-2011, 02:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 12-08-2011, 08:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 15-08-2011, 12:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 15-08-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 15-08-2011, 05:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-08-2011, 10:39 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-08-2011, 08:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 17-08-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Prevented :D - 18-08-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-08-2011, 10:34 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 19-08-2011, 02:43 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-08-2011, 07:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 20-08-2011, 11:26 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 22-08-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 24-08-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-08-2011, 04:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-08-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 29-08-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 31-08-2011, 11:01 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 31-08-2011, 03:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 02-09-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 02-09-2011, 04:13 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 03-09-2011, 07:02 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 03-09-2011, 07:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Lorely - 23-10-2011, 12:32 AM


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