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More Than Love...[+16/+17]

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#55
11-08-2011, 06:20 PM
Hellau Elz!

Briliant capitolul. Mi-a placut foarte mult. Tu chiar sti ce faci aici. Naratiunea a fost buna. Te descurci foarte bine cu ea. Dialogul deloc sec. Cate-o replica pe aici.. cate-o replica pe acolo. Descrierea e cea mai tare. Sentimentele personajelor sunt descrise foarte frumos, chiar nu am ce comenta. Ma faci sa simt ca sunt si eu pe acolo, printr-un coltisor intunecat. Greseli de tastare.. hm. Nu am vazut. Nu m-am uitat dupa ele. Actiunea nu e fugarita de nici un fel de gaina. Totul decurge foarte frumos.
Au, au! Deabea astept sa vad ce se va intampla acolo. De ce am impresia ca Sasuke se va criza in ultimul hal si nu-l va accepta pe sarmanul bebe? Atata-i trebe ca il fac file.

Te astept cu nextul.
Bafta si mulllllllll~ta inspiratie in continuare. : ]

Bye, bye!
:bye:
Debb.<3
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Dragostea poate fi inselatoare! Finished.xD || Pentru ca inca te mai iubesc


Răspunsuri în acest subiect
More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 11:31 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 16-07-2011, 01:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 05:28 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 16-07-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 16-07-2011, 06:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-07-2011, 10:07 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de stylish.lov3 - 17-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Elyy - 17-07-2011, 10:24 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-07-2011, 11:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-07-2011, 08:56 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-07-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 20-07-2011, 10:23 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 21-07-2011, 11:27 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 22-07-2011, 03:57 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 23-07-2011, 12:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 23-07-2011, 01:36 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 23-07-2011, 01:50 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 23-07-2011, 08:08 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 25-07-2011, 09:18 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 25-07-2011, 10:59 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 25-07-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-07-2011, 01:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 27-07-2011, 02:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 27-07-2011, 03:04 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Sho-Yo - 27-07-2011, 04:37 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 27-07-2011, 04:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Laura ♥ - 27-07-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-07-2011, 12:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Alle - 29-07-2011, 02:34 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 01-08-2011, 11:16 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 05-08-2011, 01:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 06-08-2011, 04:53 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 07-08-2011, 11:06 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 07-08-2011, 11:30 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 08-08-2011, 09:40 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 08-08-2011, 11:41 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 09-08-2011, 05:48 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 10-08-2011, 09:29 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 09:55 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 11-08-2011, 06:20 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 12-08-2011, 12:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 12-08-2011, 02:52 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 12-08-2011, 08:35 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 15-08-2011, 12:22 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 15-08-2011, 02:33 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 15-08-2011, 05:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 17-08-2011, 10:39 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 17-08-2011, 08:06 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 17-08-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Prevented :D - 18-08-2011, 09:49 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 19-08-2011, 10:34 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Debb.' - 19-08-2011, 02:43 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 19-08-2011, 07:31 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Anna - 20-08-2011, 11:26 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 22-08-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 24-08-2011, 10:48 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 26-08-2011, 04:58 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 29-08-2011, 11:11 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 29-08-2011, 03:25 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 31-08-2011, 11:01 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 31-08-2011, 03:21 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 02-09-2011, 11:21 AM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 02-09-2011, 04:13 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Piersicuta - 03-09-2011, 07:02 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Miranda. - 03-09-2011, 07:11 PM
RE: More Than Love...[+16/+17] - de Lorely - 23-10-2011, 12:32 AM


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