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[Naruto] Jail is my home

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Răspunsuri: 63
Subiecte: 5
Data înregistrării: Mar 2009
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#22
10-08-2011, 10:45 PM
Hey! xD


Finally .. un fic care nu este SasuSaku ( ca deja ma saturasem de ficurile alea). Ideea orginala , chiar geniala dupa parerea mea, foarte bine dezvoltata. As minti daca as spune ca nu esti o scriitoare desavarsita. Imi place cum povestesti din ambele perspective si mai ales ca adaugi faze funny . Cel putin eu l-a ultimul capitol am ras. Biata Konan , e inconjurata numai de ''idioti''.
Ce nu mi-a placut este ca ia ajuns prea repde la inima lui Pain... Parca el era un traficant de droguri fara inima, nu un inmuiat la vederea primei fete de pe strada. Oricum, compensezi asta prin descrierea detaliata a sentimentelor.

Nu ma pricem sa critic si nici nu este nevoie, deoarece scrii foarte bine si nu ai lipsuri. M-ai lasat in suspans deoarece nu imi trece prin cap nici o idee de cine ar putea fii marele ''sef''. Sa asteptam si sa vedem...

Astept cu nerabdare next!! :* Spor la scris!
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Răspunsuri în acest subiect
Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 31-07-2011, 10:15 PM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de hiimera - 01-08-2011, 09:06 AM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 01-08-2011, 12:43 PM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de hiimera - 01-08-2011, 01:06 PM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 01-08-2011, 01:51 PM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de hiimera - 03-08-2011, 11:30 AM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 03-08-2011, 01:26 PM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 04-08-2011, 12:34 AM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 04-08-2011, 11:46 AM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 05-08-2011, 05:37 PM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 05-08-2011, 08:56 PM
RE: Jail is my ... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 05-08-2011, 08:58 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 10-08-2011, 03:49 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 10-08-2011, 08:14 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 10-08-2011, 10:45 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 12-08-2011, 05:34 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 12-08-2011, 09:39 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 12-08-2011, 09:48 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 17-08-2011, 12:17 AM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Zummy - 17-08-2011, 12:28 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 18-08-2011, 10:14 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 18-08-2011, 10:39 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Zummy - 18-08-2011, 10:44 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 18-08-2011, 11:02 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 19-08-2011, 12:28 AM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 02-09-2011, 11:33 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Yuki4ever - 04-09-2011, 01:45 AM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 10-09-2011, 12:34 AM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Zummy - 10-09-2011, 08:12 AM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Miranda. - 17-09-2011, 06:43 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Search - 29-09-2011, 06:10 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de ^Ciresica^ - 01-10-2011, 02:32 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de Mina-chan - 01-10-2011, 10:18 PM
RE: Jail is my... home [+16/+18] - de i Ramenn. - 02-10-2011, 03:40 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 20-02-2012, 11:43 AM
RE: Jail is my home - de Zummy - 14-03-2012, 10:44 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de DiZ - 10-05-2012, 11:15 AM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 13-05-2012, 03:36 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de ^Ciresica^ - 13-05-2012, 09:22 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 22-07-2012, 01:21 AM
RE: Jail is my home - de Erina Ozaki - 29-07-2012, 01:47 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de rovy - 12-11-2012, 06:36 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de MadalinaMada - 30-11-2012, 11:38 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 01-12-2012, 10:08 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de ^Ciresica^ - 01-12-2012, 11:46 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Erina Ozaki - 10-01-2013, 07:47 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 21-03-2013, 05:35 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 11-06-2013, 09:56 PM
RE: Jail is my home - de Ayumi Michaelis - 21-08-2013, 01:14 PM

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